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Storm
Storm
Storm
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Storm

Written by Brigid Kemmerer

Narrated by Renée Chambliss

Rating: 4 out of 5 stars

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Ever since her ex-boyfriend spread lies about her, Becca Chandler is suddenly getting all the guys-the ones she doesn't want. Then she saves Chris Merrick from a beating in the school parking lot. Chris is different. Way different: he can control water-just like his brothers can control fire, wind, and earth. They're powerful. Dangerous. Marked for death.

And now that she knows the truth, so is Becca.

When Hunter, the mysterious new kid in town, turns up with a talent for being in the wrong place at the right time, Becca thinks she can trust him. But then Hunter goes head-to-head with Chris, and Becca wonders who's hiding the most dangerous truth of all . . .
LanguageEnglish
Release dateMar 24, 2015
ISBN9781494581077
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Brigid Kemmerer

Brigid Kemmerer is the author of the New York Times bestseller Defy the Night, the New York Times bestselling Cursebreaker series, which includes A Curse So Dark and Lonely, A Heart So Fierce and Broken, and A Vow So Bold and Deadly, and Forging Silver into Stars. She has also written the contemporary young adult romances Call It What You Want, More Than We Can Tell, and Letters to the Lost, as well as paranormal young adult stories, including the Elemental series and Thicker Than Water. A full-time writer, Brigid lives in the Baltimore area with her family. www.brigidkemmerer.com @BrigidKemmerer

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I'm giving this book 3.5 stars, leaning away from the 3 star rating, closer to the 4. I had a few issues with it but I was so intrigued by it that I'm going to buy the next book.Becca, as a character, didn't do much for me. I see her mainly as a catalyst but she's not particularly useful although not overly stupid either. She's not quite the strong female character I like to see in YA novels, but I did like her best when she stood up to the boys and slammed the door on them, etc. She has some potential. However, the Merrick brothers are fascinating and I'm enjoying the secret world building that's been happening. I don't care that they are ZOMGGG SO HOT (please shut up) and it frustrates me that this was the first thing mentioned about any of the main male characters, Hunter included. I want to know something more interesting than how good looking the boys are. Once we got past that, you could see the depth of character of the four brothers and their history was well developed. The author had clearly spent time on their characters, more time than on Becca or any other secondary characters, and I look forward to see how they develop over further books.My issues arose, as mentioned before, the wonderful hotness of all boys involved. I'm sick to death of boys being described that way like that's all that is important, and also how girls (Becca was very guilty of this) just seem to lose control around them while boys keep their cool. It seems a very dominant thing and in this novel, Hunter particularly was very protective of Becca in an Edward sort of way. Boring and annoying. Let her do what she wants. And yet he let her go off with Drew, with whom she was in the most danger. Go figure.This book also seems very 'boys club' - the four Merrick brothers, Tyler and Seth, Hunter. All the boys are special or different in some way, they have these Elemental 'powers' for lack of a better word - but where are the girls? The girls are dramatic, like Quinn, or bitches, like Lilah. Where are the girls with the cool powers? (view spoiler) I only hope that this is something to be developed in further books, although I can see Becca getting jealous if any other girls show themselves to be like the brothers. I hope I'm wrong, but at the moment that's what I'm predicting.Still, I'm interested enough to want to go and buy the next book to see where it goes. 
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    VOYA - Laurie CavanaughParanormal romantic suspense fans will love this debut in the Elemental series, featuring strong but vulnerable sixteen-year-old Becca Chandler, whose helpful nature entangles her with a boy from school she barely knows, Chris Merrick, and his three sexy brothers. Each brother can stir up winds, create riptides, spread fires, or start earthquakes—elemental powers that sometimes get out of control. Although intrigued by Chris's mysterious ability to command water and his growing interest in her, Becca keeps her distance, suspecting the Merricks are causing events that almost get her killed. Skittish about relationships in general because of rumors flying around school about her, Becca does begin to trust a new guy in her class, Hunter, who, despite being a rock-hard fighter with a trained police dog for a pet, treats Becca gently, much to Chris's annoyance. Awesome paranormal powers, a love triangle, risk-taking adventure, and the secret of Becca's connection to the Merrick brothers create exciting chemistry in this edgy page-turner that will appeal to older teen and adult paranormal suspense fans, both male and female
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Well, let me tell you that after I read Storm, I just went on straight ahead and read Spark and Spirit as well. Because they were that good! So, I'm writing this review kind of in a retrospect, analyzing all three books and mainly focusing on Storm.

    One thing I noticed, and to tell you the truth, it's quite amazing, really, is how Kemmerer has been able to capture and match the tone of each novel to the personality of the lead male character. For example, Storm features Chris Merrick, who has affinity to water. The voice of the book is calm and relaxing, like flowing water.

    Spark features Gabriel, whose talent is to work with fire and well, the tone of that book is passionate, irrational and well.. fiery.

    Then there's Hunter's voice in Spirit. And it's so emotional, going hot and cold all the time, it's utterly incredible!

    And to think that the author could come up with individual writing styles for each boy's book... well that's pure talent.

    Anyway. So, Storm.

    it's beautiful. It's full of mystery (though the reader is privy to it all). it's the story of Becca, an average girl, living in an average tow, who finds herself at the wrong place in the right time. She saves Chris Merrick from nearly being killed and that's how the saga begins.

    Unfortunately (or rather fortunately for us readers) it's definitely NOT where it ends. There are yet more secrets that are revealed gradually. There are relationships that get developed and others that get broken. New people come, new things happen. Who's who is incredibly difficult to tell.

    And in the midst of it all, love springs to life where least expected. Brothers' ties are broken/mended/developed.

    One thing is sure. The ride is exhilarating and will blow your mind.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    BEEP! BEEP! This is a warning from the National Weather System, be advised that a large storm is forming...We ask that you seek shelter immediately....Yeah, this book is totally sweet! Let me tell you that once you read the first page you are their control and there is no way out. The plot line of this book rocked. Four brothers all elemental, smokin' hot with I don't give a crap alpha attitude and you fall in love. I like that each brother is unique in their voice and their characters.Their attributes to who they are just fall off the pages!I love that even though this book focuses mainly on Chris, the reader can learn more about the other brothers without giving too much away. It's like she leaves the reader a clue as to what brother to expect in the next book. The reader is left will just enough of what brother is like to fall in love with him and eagerly await for their book.The love interest certainly takes a whole new spin. I like that this girl is made to fit Chris. She is like his polar opposite. I really adored how fate really worked in Becca life. They always managed to meet at the same time, same place,etc. They were meant to be.Storm is an fantastic start to a new series. With a whole new fresh spin on paranormal and love, Kemmerer will take you like a Storm. Sweeping the reader fast and furious, hold on tight. This Storm is a strong one!
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I pretty much adored this book - and all the characters. I couldnt put it down! The brothers can use elements, and the girl is an average human.



    Im alittle too lazy to write a full review so: I hated that Becca ends up being an elemental/her dad is the Guide. Seemed a bit too easy of an answer.

    I also hated that book two isnt a continuation of this story. I want to know what happens to this clan through Becca and Chris' eyes. I hate series that jump around from person to person - it ruins the ENTIRE story for me.

  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Review courtesy of All Things Urban FantasyBrigid Kemmerer’s new paranormal YA Elementals series is like a baby Black Dagger Brotherhood or Lords of the Underworld series. We’ve got four supernatural brothers with big time alpha blood running in their veins and more than a few chips on their shoulders. They have volatile personalities connected to their elemental powers which is tempered by fierce loyalty and protective streaks, all of which gives each of them a distinct scary but sexy vibe that I always fall for. Throw in a smart, resourceful girl who unwittingly gets caught up in a long standing elemental feud you get an almost perfect storm of a book.The relationship dynamics between the brothers is so believable as a family. They fight with each other almost violently, but when one of them is hurt they lash out as one against the attacker. And the writing is very well done, especially the scenes involving all four brothers. Group scenes are notoriously challenging, but you’d never know it reading STORM. All four brothers feel distinctive and present in the scenes (and without exception, they are totally crushable). Beyond the brothers, the supporting cast is also very strong, and the worldbuilding comprehensive but simply explained.I hate having to bring this up since I was having a blast reading STORM until one particularly sensitive subject was brought up: rape. *SLIGHTLY SPOILERISH* Paranormal fiction is no stranger to the topic of rape, but it’s not as common in YA, nor is it usually gang rape. Becca has a slut reputation at school thanks to an incident involving her ex and the soccer team. We find out that she got drunk and let him pass her around at a party…she said she let them at first, but there were so many of them that they couldn’t tell when she started to fight back…she vomited just before someone got to home base. She never told anyone or pressed charges. She goes to parties with these guys and even foolishly goes off with one when he says he wants to apologize which turns into an ambush where the entire soccer team tries to gang rape her. They are stopped, but not nearly soon enough in my opinion. Throughout all this, Becca doesn’t respond at all the way I would expect the victim of this kind of sexual assault would. It’s not just that she keeps quiet(I understand that reaction), but it’s like the whole thing is just a minor issue. It doesn’t effect her beyond crude sexual taunts at school and having to prove to any guy that she’s interested in that she’s not a whore. I couldn’t get past how this monumentally huge issue was treated…even with people trying to kill each other and elemental powers everywhere, it didn’t justify low-key treatment of rape and sexual assault. *END OF SPOILER*Most of STORM was a blast of hot guys and elemental powers. Paranormal Romance junkies who love adult brotherhood series like those from J.R. Ward, Gena Showalter, and Larissa Ione will definitely want to give this YA series a go. For the intense and exciting plot, the brutally hot brothers, and the engaging writing, I’d give this a 4/5, but the shoddy treatment of the rape/assault subject brought it down to a 3/5. I’m still very intrigued by the Elementals series and already have Gabriel’s story (SPARK which releases in September 2012) on my wishlist.Sexual Content: Kissing, sexual assault, attempted gang rape (see spoiler section), crude sexual dialogue.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    This has been in my TBR shelf for so long. Due to the high ratings and the undeniably appealing cover, I just had to give it a shot. Just like most readers, I think I died and gone to literary heaven when I heard that there we're 4 good-looking brothers within the pages of this book. I can't say I was disappointed but it definitely did not live up to my expectations. I wanted a nice introduction to their Elemental world but all I got was confusion. With nearly everything. The elementals, Becca's school situation and the past. It's like I walked into the middle of a movie and I'm just left trying to figure out what's happened. A lot of the motions set into place we're mostly cause of what happened beforehand. It would have been nice to at least half of the backstory explained in full detail but no, I was left with itty bitty pieces of it for me to stitch up to get a full understanding the situations. That was frustrating for me! I didn't feel any connection with the characters either. They felt dead to me. Especially the guy protagonist! Honestly, I didn't see the appeal of the Merrick brothers anymore. It's a damn shame because I really thought they ALL could have been amazing ones. There were hardly any lines, mouth-watering descriptions or even wits for me to at least swoon over. Not to mention, I found most of them are jerks. Granted they went through what they went through but how am I supposed to like a guy who's pissed or indecisive half of the time? There were some points we're I liked them but other than that, I didn't really care for them.I kind of liked Becca. I found myself sympathizing with her but not as much as really liking her character. I kind of liked Hunter too but after I got to the end? Not really as much.I guess one of the things that kept me reading was because I was trying to figure out who Becca was going to end up with! I was going for Hunter then to Chris then to Hunter then to Chris. I don't really care for "love triangles", usually they annoy the crap out of me. This one was bearable although there wasn't a lot of romance to begin with. The relationship between the characters we're pretty hard to distinguish.Past halfway throughout the book, an actual story picked up and I found myself invested. There was enough mystery and I was actually shocked for a second or two when we got to couple of twists.Overall, I liked it enough to finish it but BARELY. Maybe it went too slow or too fast, I really don't know. It feels like everyone liked this book and I'm missing out because I feel otherwise! Brigid Kemmerer tackled too many interesting subjects for this story; A normal one and a fantasy, a couple then a love triangle. I'm sorry to say, that for me, it all felt short. Even reaching the end, too many questions we're left unanswered. But at least, Becca did end up with a guy or….. did she? Agh, I don't know.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    First, some back story. I followed Brigid's blog before she got this book deal, so I was very interested in reading her book. But then I saw the cover and didn't want to read it (it happens). But then! I started to see a lot of reviews stating how great it was, so I decided to give it a go.I don't really know what happened between me and Storm. We started off really well, but then it seemed to go down hill from there. For the most part, I did enjoy Storm, but I had a hard time wanting to pick it up and read, but once I would start reading I ended up enjoying it.I would say Storm suffered greatly from the There's A Lot of Other Shiny Books Sitting On My Shelf That I Would Rather Be Reading Right Now syndrome because I think I started and finished reading 2 or 3 books while reading this one.I did enjoy the Merrick brothers though. I really liked the banter between them, and they always seemed to have great one-liners that made me laugh. "'Nick,' he said. 'I think I'm going to need you to bite my arm.' 'I think I'm going to need you to run that by me again.'" – page 340I also really like Hunter's dog, Casper. "The New Kid stopped. He gave her a smile over his shoulder before looking at the dog. 'Casper, she said someone has to hold your leash.' The dog barked. Then he dipped his head, picked up the end of the leash in his mouth, and trotted after his master." – page 60I mean, who wouldn't want a dog that awesome?I also really like the whole elemental's thing. I found it very intriguing.But then there were some things I didn't like. Like Becca and Hunter's relationship. It didn't feel real to me. I felt like Becca was only talking to Hunter because she didn't want to like Chris and admit her feelings for him. But it was so obvious that Becca and Chris liked each other, and it got frustrating after a while. I love slow burn relationships, but this one rubbed me the wrong way for some reason. Maybe because Becca was "dating" Hunter in a way, and it was annoying.There was also the case of Becca's reputation at school. I kind of wished we were told right away what happened to make Becca's reputation that bad, but it's only revealed in the last 150 pages or so. And then there is an almost rape scene with the same guy who ruined Becca's reputation. I'm not really sure how I felt about all that. It was just really strange. I understand why Kemmerer would want to include a hot issue like bullying and rape, but it seemed a little out of place to me.And then there was the way the story was written. I really didn't like the 3rd person POV and the way it shifted from Becca's to Chris's. It messed with me, because sometimes the only thing that indicated a POV shift was a line break. I really wish the focus was only on Chris or Becca, not both.I'm disappointed I didn't like this book more. I was so relieved when I finished Storm. I don't even know if I want to continue with the series because I don't want to get in the same rut that Storm put me in.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Wow! I loved this book! The story was very interesting, and the characters were great. I really liked Becca and felt sorry for her situation. I also thought the dialogue was great. Right from the beginning I really liked Chris, so I wasn't expecting to also really like the other guy in the picture. I just loved all of the interactions between Becca and Hunter. They were so cute and awkward and genuine feeling. (and witty) I honestly couldn't decide which guy I wanted her to end up with. The idea of Storm was very interesting. It was definitely something different than everything else out there right now, and I couldn't get enough of it. I must say that I figured out the twists before they were revealed, but overall, it was suspenseful and action-packed. I'm definitely excited to read more in this series!
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Storm picks up about 5 years after where Elemental leaves off. Four totally hot brothers, Michael, the twins Gabriel and Nick, and Chris Merrick are not only to die for, they also have the ability to control the elements, earth, air, fire, and water. When leaving school late one evening after a class, Becca Chandler notices a guy getting beat up in the parking lot. She intervenes, and manages to help save the youngest of the Merrick brothers, Chris. Chris is beaten up pretty badly, and she is able to get him home, only to find that the oldest brother, Michael, is rude, questions her motives, and kind of scares her a little bit, especially when she mentions that she gave Chris some water. Chris is a water Elemental, and just like his brothers, a very powerful one. The last thing the Merrick brothers need is to break their agreement not to use their powers and have the town call in the Guides to deal with the issue. Try as she may, Becca can't seem to stay away from Chris. Then a new boy, Hunter, appears on the scene, who also seems very interested in Becca. Hunter seems like a really nice guy, but are Hunter's motives pure? On top of that, Becca's father who left her and her mother has popped back into her life, but is his reason for suddenly appearing really about Becca, or is there more to the story? I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this book. These four guys are such typical guys, hot guys mind you, that have supernatural powers. The characters are superbly written and you just can't help but fall in love with each of the brothers. Sure, they fight with each other, like you would expect brothers to do, but they fiercely love and protect one another also. Brigid Kemmerer has outdone herself in writing these characters and making them seem so real. Then there is Becca. I really loved Becca. She has had a really rough time, especially since her ex-boyfriend has spread lies about her, and now everyone picks on her all the time. She and Chris have some real chemistry going on, and Becca even ends up discovering a lot about herself and who she really is. Hunter is the new kid that enters the picture in this novel. He's hot, he's nice, he says and does all the right things, sometimes he seems to good to be true, and he is interested in Becca also. Actually, I liked Hunter a lot, and I kept being torn between which guy I wanted Becca to be with. So yes, there is plenty of romance in this book. There is also plenty of action, pretty much nonstop action. From fighting for their lives to fighting with each other over trivial things, these brothers never have a dull moment. Needles to say this story is fast-paced, the plot is great, and there are twists and turns around every corner. If you are a YA reader, then Storm is one of those books that you are not going to want to miss. I loved it and I highly, highly recommend it.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    When I first read the summary for Storm by Brigid Kemmerer, I really, really hoped it was going to be good. It had all the ingredients for a fantastic paranormal story, namely hot boys with cool super powers and I simply could not wait to read it. I’m happy to tell you that Storm delivered and then some! Think The Outsiders with the Merrick boys being like the Curtis brothers but having the ability to control the elements. Yes guys, it’s like that!When our main character, Becca, sees Chris Merrick being beaten up by two older boys, she steps in to help him and inadvertently becomes caught up in an ongoing feud involving the Merricks and some other families in their town.I started reading Storm expecting very cool paranormal elements and I got them. Chris controls water and Kemmerer does an awesome job describing how he communicates with his element. This book focuses on Chris so we learn the most about his ability but we do get to see his brothers use their powers as well. What I did not expect were some subplots in story involving sexual assault and bullying. The issues were handled well and made the story more rounded. Becca is a strong main character who has made some poor decisions but is doing her best to deal with them. Chris, the youngest brother (think Ponyboy) is a likable male lead. There is a love triangle involving new boy Hunter (don’t worry, it’s well done), so technically, Storm actually has five swoon worthy boys instead of four.While I don’t have brothers myself, I can’t help but think that Brigid Kemmerer captures the conflicts and issues that come up among brothers, especially when an older brother is the one doing the parenting. I don’t usually like bad boys but Gabriel (who controls fire) is my favorite brother in all his hot headed, rude, snarky, jerky glory. I’m so happy that the next book in the series, Spark, will focus on him. Storm is very fast paced, filled with a lot of action and awesome paranormal elements. I raced through this book and cannot wait to read Spark which thankfully comes out in September. Even though Storm does not end with a cliffhanger, it’s the type of book that makes you want to read the sequel as soon as you are done with the first! This is a great start to an exciting new series and Kemmerer is definitely one to watch.Content: Kissing, sexual discussions, heavy profanity, underage drinking and violence. Due to the issues of sexual assault and the nature of the bullying, I would recommend this book to older/more mature teens and adults.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Contemporary, Paranormal, Young Adult Annapolis, MarylandBecca Chandler is finding herself getting all the guys especially the ones she doesn’t want. It started when her ex-boyfriend spread lies about her. Then Becca finds Chris Merrick getting a beating and manages to save him. Chris is different. More different than she could possibly imagine. He can control water just like his brothers that can control wind, fire, and earth. The brothers are powerful and dangerous. They are also marked for death. Now that Becca knows the truth she is also marked for death.When your life is at stake keeping secrets becomes a lot more difficult. Then a mysterious new kid turns up around the school and seems to have a talent for being in the wrong place at the right time. Becca thinks she can trust Hunter because of that. When Hunter and Chris go head-to-head Becca has to wonder who is hiding the most dangerous truth. This is a fast place story that keeps up until the very end. It gives a twist to the paranormal genre that proves to be all its own. The reader will find themselves sucked into a story that is different from other paranormal stories and proves to be very engrossing. The characters are fascinating and watching how they are dealing with their lives and the tragedies that have happening in each of their lives proves to be a story that the reader gets lost in as they read to see just what will happen to each and every character. This is the first book in a series that if the others are like this one will be one series that will have readers wanting to re-read it over and over.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    Borderline crackalicious. The explanation of the powers wasn't very well done, imo.. 2 guys going for the same girl is pretty standard and trite. The best parts of the book were the scenes between the brothers.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Storm was a lot of fun to reread knowing what was going to happen and watching for certain things. My only issue is since I still don't like Hunter I pretty much skimmed most of the parts involving him. I hope to get another short story with Becca and Chris at some point.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Brigid Kemmerer is a refreshing new voice in YA literature. Storm has a lot going on, and all of it is fantastic. The plot is intriguing, action-packed, and unique. The characters are wonderfully flawed, fully developed, and easy to relate to and care about. Storm is one of those books that I could not put down. I read it all in one sitting, and my only thought at the end was, "it can't be over! I want more!" This is one of the best debuts I've read all year, and I cannot wait to read Spark, the sequel. This is a book that cannot be missed. Becca, the female lead, has had a rough life. Because of this, she is extremely paranoid around people, especially males. Her reactions may seem a bit extreme at first, but as her story unfolds, the things she does start to make sense. She just wants to protect herself, but she feels like she'll never be safe again. Her past and the fact that she always wants to help others, even though she can't help herself, make her a character who is easy to care about. I connected with her almost instantly, and I was rooting for her the entire time. Also, she is a strong character. She has been through a lot, but she is able to continue facing adversity. She rarely complains, too, which is nice. Chris, the male lead, has also had a rough life, but in a different way. The poor guy is also socially stupid at times, and I wanted to smack him on more than one occasion for saying something stupid. However, it's clear that he has a good heart and he doesn't want to hurt anyone. He just wants to be able to live his life without people constantly threatening him and wanting to kill him and his brothers. I have no idea what it would be like to live like that, but I still found myself sympathizing with him. He is a likable, albeit socially clueless, character. The secondary characters are also extremely well-developed, though I can't wait to learn more about Gabriel in Spark. I felt like I knew Michael already from the novella, and Nick and Hunter are also two characters I want to see more of. I wasn't a huge fan of Quinn, Becca's best friend, but I didn't hate her either. She is just more typical and generic than the others. There is nothing special about her, at least nothing I could see. The plot is action-packed from the beginning, and as the book progresses, the situations escalate and become more dire. By the end of the novel, I was white-knuckling my Kindle, furiously clicking the "next page" button in order to see what would happen next. Also, the plot is unique. I've never heard of an idea quite like this one, where people can control the elements in the way that these kids do. The reasoning behind who has power and who doesn't is also interesting. I hope to learn more about it in the following installments. Another thing that I loved is the fact that there is no insta-love between Becca and any of the male characters. Everything develops naturally from friendships. That's a nice change from how most YA novels operate. There is a love triangle, but it's not that dramatic. It's just enough to keep you guessing. And Becca has a good reason for choosing who she chooses. There is none of this, "oh, but I love you both," crap. I respected her for that. Additionally, the pacing is perfect. Nothing felt rushed, and nothing dragged. Furthermore, I loved the alternating POVs in this novel.The POV is third person limited, and it switches between Becca and Chris. Sometimes I don't like that, but for this novel, it worked. I really enjoyed being able to see things from both Becca's and Chris' perspective. It helped me get to know them better. I felt like I understood both of them more clearly than I would have had the novel just focused on one character. It was also interesting to me how Kemmerer seemed to weave messages into the story without being obvious about it. I'm not sure if this was intentional or if it was just how the story played out. The entire thing was natural. There seemed to be an anti-bullying undercurrent within this novel, as well as the "don't judge what you don't understand," and "you never know what someone else has been through" philosophies. Kemmerer did not use a character as a mouthpiece against these things, in fact, these issues were barely mentioned. However, the novel shows what happens when people judge, hate, and bully for no good reason. It shows how things like that affect entire communities and not just specific people, and it shows how much damage is truly done when things like that occur. It also illustrates how bullying can get out of hand and become extremely dangerous. Again, I'm not sure if she intended for this to happen, or if this is just how the story played out, but it was all extremely realistic. Nothing felt forced, and nothing felt preachy. Whether or not these messages were intended, I am glad they are in there. People need to be more aware of how they treat others, and I feel that art, literature, media, and music are places that can draw attention to these problems and make a difference, especially when the situation is handled in a subtle and classy manner. Overall, I would recommend this book to anyone. The plot is fantastic, the writing is top notch, the characters are amazing, and the messages within the story are inspiring. If you haven't read Storm yet, you are missing out.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Wow, wow, WOW!

    Storm is the first book in the extremely promising Elemental Series by début young adult author Brigid Kemmerer. As you can probably surmise from my reaction above, I LOVED this book and am ready to share my favorable impressions.

    In Storm we are introduced to Becca Chandler and Chris Merrick, both of whom are carrying secrets. When Becca finds Chris being beaten up by two bullies in the school parking lot, she jumps in to rescue him. She manages to get him into her car and drives him home, where she meets his three brothers – twins, Gabriel and Nick, and older brother/guardian, Michael. Gabriel is the hot-head, Nick is the peacekeeper, Michael is struggling to keep his brothers in-line so they aren’t taken away from him, and Chris is the baby of the family. After Becca and Chris escape from another incident with the bullies, she learns that Chris and his brothers are Elementals and that each is drawn to a specific natural element – water (Chris), fire (Gabriel), air (Nick), and earth (Michael). She also discovers there is a special group of Elementals called Fifths who command all four natural elements plus a fifth – spirit – and that they are trained to eliminate other Elementals.

    Chris is not the only boy to notice Becca, however; there is a new student at school named Hunter, who has moved to town with his mother after the death of his father and uncle in a car accident. He is strong and confident, but gentle, as he realizes Becca has been traumatized by an incident that occurred over the summer. Helping build her confidence, he teaches her some self-defense so she will not be victimized again. But Hunter has secrets of his own that will set him on a collision course with the Merrick brothers, and Becca is caught between.

    The story is told in the third person narrative which I know may turn some readers off right away, but I felt like I got to know all these characters very well even without the first-person experience. Kemmerer shifts viewpoints throughout the novel between Becca and Chris, which really helps the reader identify with the characters. We see the brothers’ lives through Chris’ eyes, while Becca helps us relate to Hunter. Becca’s relationships with Chris and Hunter build slowly, which gives us the opportunity to create connections with all three characters. There is some serious tension in the Merrick household and we see it from both an insider and an outsider perspective. I would have to say that the brother who really popped out (after Chris, of course) was Gabriel, with his fiery temper and strength of character. Michael and Nick are developed to a lesser extent, but I felt like I had a solid lock on Michael’s character by the end; Nick, however, was still a bit of a mystery.

    Becca is a great heroine and I found her to be a well-rounded character with strengths and weaknesses. She has been hurt in the past, but is trying to fight her fears. She is brave, caring, intelligent and, when she makes a mistake, she owns up to it and apologizes. The loyalty between Becca and her best friend, Quinn, is admirable as well. Quinn stands by Becca as the lies her ex-boyfriend told spread, while Becca supports Quinn through her troubles at home. However, Becca is clearly a teenager; she is hostile to her absentee dad when he finally reappears, and she has a serious desire to fit in. Unfortunately, this desire to fit in is what led to the incident involving her ex-boyfriend and left her reputation in tatters. She has learned to be wary, which makes her actions when jumping in to help Chris all the more courageous.

    The relationship between Becca and Chris is a bit of a contrast with the one she develops with Hunter. Chris blows hot and cold, while Hunter is steady. Chris will fight to protect her, while Hunter shows her how to protect herself. The loss of a parent has effected both boys, but on a more emotional level with Hunter than with Chris. When trouble is drawn to Becca, though, it is more often Chris who is there to help her through.

    Secrets abound in this book and just enough is revealed that I really felt I had everything figured out. It turns out that I was wrong; I really didn’t expect the circumstances of Becca’s past to unfold the way they did, while I was only partially right regarding the Fifth who had been sent to eliminate the Merricks. I love surprises, so finding out that everything I believed wasn’t completely accurate increased my enjoyment of this story.

    There were two reasons, though, that I dropped half a star from my rating. The first was because I felt a couple of characters could have used a bit more development – namely Quinn and Nick. Quinn obviously has some serious family issues that have contributed to her need for attention, but they are brought up quickly and then left behind. There is more development with Nick, but since he is such a quiet character compared to his brothers I didn’t feel as deep a connection to him. A comment by Becca regarding Nick’s notice of Quinn during an acrobatics routine makes me wonder if Kemmerer is planning to have these two in a relationship in the future; if so, that will probably be where the depths of both characters are explored. I just wish a little more of that exploration had occurred in this book. Secondly, I was a bit confused by the Fifths. They seem to be the most powerful Elementals since they are able to harness all the natural elements, yet they aren’t feared the way the Elementals who only harness one element are. They are held up as threatening characters, but it is then revealed that they have a great deal of compassion for those around them. I don’t really understand how they were chosen as executioners and I’m hoping this is revealed in later books.

    Packed with relatable characters, secrets, and four fascinating brothers with some very interesting powers, Brigid Kemmerer’s Storm is a strong start to an exciting new young adult paranormal series. While I would have liked a bit more character development of two of the secondary characters, it’s only because everyone else was so well-defined that I felt they were short-changed. The romance is built slowly and carefully, while the secrets have just enough of a twist to keep an element of surprise as they are revealed. I enjoyed this book so much that I added book 2, Spark (Gabriel’s story), to my list of upcoming releases so I can be ready to purchase it as soon as it is available in September.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Kemmerer has created an interesting world with people who can control the elements and the rivalries among them. Becca gets involved in it when she rescues Chris Merrick from some attackers when she is going home from her first self-defense class. Becca has just started her junior year with a bad reputation. Her ex-boyfriend is spreading lies and rumors about her. Since he is a star on the soccer team, Becca doesn't have support for her side of the story except for her best friend Quinn who has major issues of her own. Becca is an angry person. Not only is she rightfully angry and Drew and the other guys who are slandering her, she is angry at her father for abandoning her when she was eleven. She lives with her mother who is a nurse in the Emergency Room and works lots of nights. Her father has had the habit of phoning every six months but Becca is responsive to his feeble at communication.By rescuing Chris, Becca gets involved in a world she didn't know existed. Chris is his three older brothers are Elementals. Chris has an affinity for water, Nick for air, Gabriel for fire, and Michael for earth. They have such strong affinities that the other Elementals in town want them dead. Pure Elementals like Chris and his brothers are supposed to be killed by the Guides. Before they died, Chris's parents made a deal with the other Elementals in town to not turn in the boys. Unfortunately, that doesn't mean that the Elemental contemporaries of the boys can't harass them though to try to force them to use their gifts in such a way that the Guides will be called in.Chris and Becca are forming a tentative friendship when a new guy comes to town. Hunter has lost his father and uncle in an accident and his living with his mother at his grandparents. This guy has lots of secrets but he also befriends Becca. The plot is complex; the action is non-stop; and there are lots of surprises in this one. Readers who want to read about high school life, romance triangles and a unique paranormal setting will enjoy this one.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    When this book arrived on my doorstep I will admit that I had not heard of it. I have no idea how it was not already on my radar, but I am very thankful that the publisher sent it to me because it has all the elements I love in my books! It is a young adult paranormal romance and has four awesome brothers that rival many of the boys I see in my adult paranormal romance novels. They have a great sense of humor, unique voices and are very lovable. Storm is a paranormal romance, but the core of the story is the relationship between the four brothers. Sometimes in books the voices of characters who are related to one another can blend together and it is hard to tell them apart. That is not the case at all in Storm, while we focus in on Chris in this book all four brothers have very distinct personalities and it is easy to tell who is speaking when dialogue floods the page. Even in action sequences when things can get confusing, Brigid did an amazing job of differentiating the brothers’ voices. We get a back story on these guys and all of them appear in the story enough to give us a glimpse into all of their heads. I appreciated getting well developed secondary characters and it has made me that much more anxious for all of the brothers stories.There is romance in this story, but it takes the back burner for most of the novel and lets the action take center stage. There is also a love triangle. I am not such a fan of those. I went into Storm knowing this though, so I was prepared for Becca to be torn between two guys. I gravitated toward Chris and just had to keep fingers crossed that Becca came to see how great he really was in the end as well. Not that Chris makes it easy for her since he is trying to push her away to protect her. I understood his reasons, but I still wanted to shake him at times and get him to fight for Becca. Don’t get me wrong, Hunter seemed to have his heart in the right place, I just did not trust him fully. I have a feeling though that Hunter is going to be making an appearance in future books and I am interested to see what role he will play in this world. There is a scene that I need to bring up that was uncomfortable to read. I have seen it mentioned in other reviews and feel I have to just address it as well. There is an almost rape in this book, it is not an easy scene to read at all. I have seen rape in paranormal fiction, but do not see it in young adult very much. I think Brigid did handle it delicately, but I still think Becca downplayed the issue just a little too much. I understand that some people handle traumatic situations differently, but I did want Becca to react more than she did, especially since it happened to her twice, by the same guys. As for the action in this book it was awesome! The scenes when they were fighting each other and the enemy were so rich and vivid I could see everything going on very clearly in my head. Brigid gave us just enough detail to keep us engaged, but kept the action moving forward at a rapid pace. I was so engrossed in this story that I devoured it in just one sitting. I started one Sunday afternoon and was finished by later that same evening. I had to know what was going to happen and who the person hunting them really was. I had my suspicions from the beginning, but still enjoyed the mystery Brigid wove for us to riddle out.The mythology was also really intriguing. It was a subject I had not seen explored before and I liked that Brigid did not dump all the information on us all at once. She eases us into this world and reveals bits and pieces to us gradually. Many times the first book in the series can throw a lot of information at you and it hard to absorb it all, but that is not the case in Storm. The mythology is peppered throughout so you do not feel lost, but soak in every detail when it is given to you. Overall, I really enjoyed Storm. Brigid made it easy to fall in love with these four brothers and root for them. It will be impossible for me to walk away from this series now. I am too invested in the lives of the Merrick’s and the people who came in and out of their world. I know the next book comes out in September and I will be eager to get my hands on it to continue along in this world.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    Curse me and my inability to just read out of order.-Girl next door in a relationship meets rock star and his dog but doesn't realize it.It was just a strange book overall, I kept reading because: SNOWED IN!!It read like a very rough first novel with not a lot to it. i am not mad I read it, I probably would've just scrolled through the news or whatever so I was plenty entertained and I'll see how the rest of the series plays out. The idea, if not the execution, behind the intimacy between the characters is why I am curious how the author grows.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Wow

    this is the second book I have read by Carian Cole and I enjoyed this one just as much as the first. Absolutely loved Storm what a bad boy but also so sweet and adorable and Evelyn when she actually let go was the perfect match for this cheeky hotty. Hated Michael with a passion, I would have kicked that losers butt to the kerb years ago what a douche, Evie was well rid, I really enjoyed the playful tone to this story and the banter of these two lovers. what a great read this was.