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    Story Structure: The Key to Successful Fiction: Red Sneaker Writers Books, #1
    Story Structure: The Key to Successful Fiction: Red Sneaker Writers Books, #1
    Story Structure: The Key to Successful Fiction: Red Sneaker Writers Books, #1
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    Story Structure: The Key to Successful Fiction: Red Sneaker Writers Books, #1

    By William Bernhardt

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    "Writing is structure," William Goldman said, but too often aspiring writers plunge into their work without grasping this fundamental principle. Story structure is one of the most important concepts for a writer to understand—and ironically, one of the least frequently taught. In this book, New York Times-bestselling author William Bernhardt explains the elements that make stories work, using examples spanning from Gilgamesh to The Hunger Games. In each chapter, he introduces essential concepts in a direct and easily comprehended manner. Most importantly, Bernhardt demonstrates how you can apply these ideas to improve your own writing. 

    LanguageEnglish
    PublisherBabylon Books
    Release dateApr 4, 2019
    ISBN9780997901078
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    William Bernhardt

    William Bernhardt (b. 1960), a former attorney, is a bestselling thriller author. Born in Oklahoma, he began writing as a child, submitting a poem about the Oklahoma Land Run to Highlights—and receiving his first rejection letter—when he was eleven years old. Twenty years later, he had his first success, with the publication of Primary Justice (1991), the first novel in the long-running Ben Kincaid series. The success of Primary Justice marked Bernhardt as a promising young talent, and he followed the book with seventeen more mysteries starring the idealistic defense attorney, including Murder One (2001) and Hate Crime (2004). Bernhardt’s other novels include Double Jeopardy (1995) and The Midnight Before Christmas (1998), a holiday-themed thriller. In 1999, Bernhardt founded Bernhardt Books (formerly HAWK Publishing Group) as a way to help boost the careers of struggling young writers. In addition to writing and publishing, Bernhardt teaches writing workshops around the country. He currently lives with his family in Oklahoma. 

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    • 3/5
      It's ok, could've been better. But, it's ok. You know?
    • 4/5
      Good practical and succinct advice. Although I was using other writing tools, I was able to surmise William's book into a 1 page 'cheat-sheet' that is helping me finish the West Coast Erotica series. :)
    • 3/5
      I did like this book for what I was wanting. I will though get another book that will go more in-depth later.

      If you want a book that goes into detail about story structure, this book is not for you. The one thing about it, he does warn you what type of book this is upfront. I do recommend this book if you want an introduction or a refresher on story structure.

      This book was highly informative given its directness. It tells you the different points in each act and the acts themselves. I enjoyed how he had a small diagram showing each example as we went along. I am a visual person and it helped me understand wherein the story he was talking about. It was a great refresher, and I learned things.

      It was an easy read and to a faster reader, a day read. This was a book that is great for someone who is getting started and wanted to know key points on the structure. This book is the first one in a series and I will be getting the rest.
    • 4/5
      Good for Beginners

      I appreciated the brevity of the book and chapter summaries, which make this an easy reference guide. I also liked that Mr. Bernhardt listed specific novels as examples for the points he was illustrating. I stress that this most helpful for beginners but it's a good refresher course for those who have been at it a while and write instinctively, without conscious awareness of what they are doing. I did not appreciate the multiple typos and formatting errors; it makes me wonder how much time and effort was actually spent on the book. That can be forgiven, however. One final note: I think the appendices are at least as important as the body of the book and should not be skipped.

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    Story Structure - William Bernhardt

    Praise for William Bernhardt and the Red Sneaker Writers Book Series

    One of the things I love about these books is that they are so accessible to every aspiring writer.

    Rick Ludwig, author of Mirrored

    This book gives everything that it promises. And all the other writing books written by William Bernhardt are on my wish list.

    C.H. Scarlett, author

    Bernhardt shows you exactly what makes literary characters keep people interested and how to use those strengths when creating characters of your own.

    R.J. Johnson, author of The Twelve Stones

    I reread these books before I start each book I write.

    Callie Hutton, author of For the Love of the Viscount

    Easy to read while delivering good material with some occasional humor.

    David Sullivan, author

    Copyright © 2013 by William Bernhardt

    Published by Babylon Books

    All rights reserved.

    No part of this book may be reproduced in any form or by any electronic or mechanical means, including information storage and retrieval systems, without written permission from the author, except for the use of brief quotations in a book review.

    The author wishes to thank Ralph Bernhardt for creating the illustrations used in this book.

    Dedicated to all the Red Sneaker Writers:

    You cannot fail unless you quit.

    Writing is structure.

    William Goldman

    Introduction

    If this is not your first Red Sneaker book, or if you’ve attended Red Sneaker retreats or conventions, you can skip to Chapter One. If you’re new, let me take a moment to explain.

    I’ve been telling stories for several decades, doing almost every kind of writing imaginable. I’ve been speaking at workshops and conferences almost as long. Every time I step behind the podium I see long rows of talented people frustrated by the fact that they haven’t sold any books. Yes, the market is changing and agents are hard to find and self-publishing can be challenging. But when aspiring writers work hard but still don’t succeed...there’s usually a reason. Too often enormous potential is lost due to a lack of fundamental knowledge. Sometimes a little guidance is all that stands between an unknown writer and a satisfying writing career.

    I’ve seen writing instructors and writing texts that seem more interested in appearing literary than in providing useful information. Sometimes I think presenters do more to obfuscate the subject than to explain it. Perhaps they feel that if they make the writing process as mysterious as possible, it will make them seem profound—or perhaps they don’t understand the subject well themselves. Some of the best writers I know are not particularly good teachers, because they’ve never thought consciously about the creative process.

    Hoping to be more useful, I founded the Red Sneaker Writing Center. Why Red Sneakers? Because I love my red sneakers. They’re practical, flexible, sturdy—full of flair and fun. In other words, they’re exactly what writing instruction should be. Practical, dynamic, and designed to unleash the creative spirit, to give the imagination a platform for creating wondrous work.

    I held the first Red Sneaker Writers conference in 2005. I invited the best speakers I knew, people who had published many books but also could teach. Then I launched my small-group writing retreats—intensive days working with a handful of aspiring writers. The retreats gave me the opportunity to read, edit, and work one-on-one with people so I could target their needs and make sure they got what would help them most. This approach worked well and I’m proud to say a substantial number of writers have graduated from my programs, published, and even hit the bestseller lists. But of course, not everyone can attend a retreat.

    This book, and the other in this series, are designed to provide assistance to writers regardless of their location. The books are short, inexpensive, and targeted to specific areas where a writer might want help.

    Let me see if I can anticipate your questions:

    Why are these books so short? Because I’ve expunged the unnecessary and the unhelpful. I’ve pared it down to the essential information, useful ideas that can improve the quality of your writing. Too many instructional books are padded with excerpts and repetition to fill word counts required by book contracts. That’s not the Red Sneaker way.

    Why are you writing several different books instead of one big book? I encourage writers to commit to writing every day and to maintain a consistent writing schedule. Sometimes reading about writing can be an excuse for not writing. You can read the Red Sneaker books without losing much time. In fact, each can be read in an afternoon. Take one day off from your writing. Make notes as you read. See if that doesn’t trigger ideas about how you might improve your writing. Then get back to work.

    You reference other books as examples, but you rarely quote excerpts. Why?

    Two reasons. First, I’m trying to keep these books brief. I will cite a book as an example, and if you want to look up a particular passage, it’s easy enough to do. You don’t need me to cut and paste it for you. Second, if I quote from materials currently under copyright protection, I have to pay a fee, which means I’d need to raise the price of the book. I don’t want to do that. I think you can grasp my points without reading copyrighted excerpts. Too often, in my opinion, excessive excerpting is done to pad the page count.

    Why does each chapter end with exercises?

    The exercises are a completely integrated and essential part of the book, designed to simulate what happens in my small-group writing retreats. Samuel Johnson was correct when he wrote: Scribendo disces scribere. Meaning: You learn to write by writing. These principles won’t be concretized in your brain until you put them into practice.

    So get the full benefit from this book. Complete the exercises. If you were in one of my retreats, this would be your homework. I won’t be hovering over your shoulder as you read this book—but you should do the exercises anyway.

    What else does the Red Sneaker Writers Center do?

    We send out a free e-newsletter filled with writing advice, market analysis, and other items of interest. If you would like to be added to the mailing list, please visit my website. We also have a free bi-weekly Red Sneaker podcast with all the latest news and interviews with industry professionals. I host an annual conference, WriterCon, over Labor Day weekend and small-group writing retreats throughout the year. There will be future books in this series. And we sponsor a literary magazine called Conclave that would love to see you submit your poems, short fiction, and creative nonfiction. Our Balkan Press publishes books, primarily fiction and poetry.

    Okay, enough of the warm-up act. Read this book. Then write your story. Follow your dreams. Never give up.

    William Bernhardt

    What Is Structure?

    And as imagination bodies forth the forms of things unknown, the poet's pen turns them to shapes, and gives to airy nothings a local habitation and a name.

    William Shakespeare

    Structure is one of the most important concepts for a writer to understand—and ironically, one of the least frequently taught. I have attended many writing conferences during my three decades as a professional writer, but the only time I’ve ever heard anyone lecturing on structure was when I was doing it myself.

    Since story structure is so important, why isn’t everyone talking about it? Is this structure business a dark secret that only William Bernhardt and a small cult of red-sneakered weirdoes understand? No (though that would be more fun). But many writers are reluctant to talk about structure, for understandable reasons. Books should be a realm that brings only insight and reward, but unfortunately, for some it has become a realm of

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