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reference 113012 hi this dissertation looks really good but the only thing u need to change is in the introduction

take out how it is bad for you and how research has found out how doctors say its bad say how it is fasion and how people like smoking it mention good things and also take the word snuff it replace it with a smoking, and also in the research heading mention u went around manchester city centre you have mentioned about leicester take that out and say its a big trend in manchester and london, can i have this back for sunday early evening as its only few small changes thanks.

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