In our workshops today I worked with Julie McHaffie and Soham Desai.

From what I gathered from this workshop is that we all had good starts to our annotations, but we all needed a little more. I can take away a lot from both of theirs because Julie had great analysis of the argument and that something mine were lacking a bit. With Sohams he laid out their goals of the article pretty well in his annotation, which I did not really write about, therefore, again I am going to try and incorporate into my own. We all thought too it would be beneficial not to label things as well, which mine did not have a lot of labels such as, The summary is but it would not sound correctly.