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Name: Hour: Date: Mrs.Wolf Title (12pt. Times New Roman, Bold) _____Indent
DOS
1. Do read your paper out loud
after each draft. Pause at each punctuation when reading paper to yourself. When reading aloud you will spot run-on sentences. If you feel like you have to take a breath when reading a sentence, it is probably a run-on.
6 TRAITS
1. Ideas and content: Definition: Interesting topic with clear message that has enough information. What Scorers Are Looking For: A clear message and answered prompt Tips: It needs to be well supported and developed. 2. Voice: Definition: Being able to hear the author through the words of the story. What Scorers Are Looking For: Does it sound like an 8th grader wrote this? Tips: Make the writing unique, make the reader want to keep reading and be open minded. 3. Word Choice: Definition: A better selection of words. What Scorers Are Looking For: Descriptive words and little word repetition. Tips: Choose words carefully, use pizzazy words to spice up the writing, avoid using tired words and your words should paint a picture. 4. Organization: Definition: The action of organizing. What Scorers Are Looking For: You have 5 paragraphs, a title, an introduction, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion. Tips: Brainstorm about your ideas, know what each paragraph will be about, and put ideas into groups. 5. Sentence Fluency: Definition: The flow of the piece of writing. The way it sounds to the ear. What Scorers Are Looking For: Long and short sentences, sentences will start differently and it flows well. Tips: Easy sentences and it has rhythm.
6. Conventions: Definition: The mechanical correctness; spelling, grammar or usage, puntuation, capitalization, and paragraphing. What Scorers Are Looking For: No major errors, capitalization and punctuation. Tips: Use clauses and parallel structures, have proper placement of modifiers, have appropiate verb tenses and do both editing; peer and self.
DONTS
1. Never begin a sentence with a conjuction. (FANBOY for, and, nor, but, or, yet) 2. Write out all number under 10 in words. This excludes times, dates, temperatures, scores. 3. Never use well or so to begin a sentence. You are not writing a note, keep your paper formal! 4. Dont use you or ANY FORM OF YOU in a formal paper. Instead use words like people, one, and teenagers. 5. Dont end your sentence with prepositions. 6. Avoid using like You are not a valley girl. 7. NEVER end a sentence with the word at. 8. Dont text write in any assignment you hand in. 9. Dont call your essays/papers stories 10. DO NOT end a paper with phrases like: thats all I have to say, Now you know what I researched, The end, Goodbye.