Sum up your feedback I think my feedback is good because it identifies strengths and weaknesses.

It goes through the good aspects of the proposal, and importantly, it states why it is good. The same applies for the negative aspects of the proposal, it doesnt just identify the negative aspects, it actually goes on to say why it wasnt as good as it could be. On the other hand, I think that the section about the weaknesses of the generation of ideas could be improved as it is quite vague. A way to improve this would be to highlight some examples of how I could go into more detail, or in what areas.

What do you agree with in your feedback and why? I agree with the fact that I could go into more depth about what I am going to create and the methods I am going to use to create it, as my description is quite vague. I also agree that I could go into more detail on some different areas in terms of the generation of ideas.

What do you not agree with in your feedback and why? I disagree with the statement that I wrote too much in the summary of my novel, as it is a rather complicated story and I believe that it needed the description it did to truly understand the story and what its about.