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NAME: _______________________

DATE: _________________

Writing Process Worksheet (Accompanies Unit 9, page 110, E) ASSIGNMENT: Write a paragraph about your next trip. 1. PREWRITING
Make notes below about your next trip.

Destination When Means of transportation Things you plan to do Problems you think you might have Things youll do to have a successful trip

2. WRITING
On a separate piece of paper, write a first draft of your paragraph.

3. PEER FEEDBACK
Meet with a partner and read each others paragraph. After reading the paragraph, complete the Peer Feedback Checklist. Then give your partner your feedback.

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PEER FEEDBACK CHECKLIST 1. Is the paragraph interesting? If yes, write why. If no, suggest ways to make it interesting. a. ________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________ 2. Is the paragraph clear? If no, point out the parts that are not clear and suggest ways to make them clearer. a. ________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________ 3. Did your partner use the new vocabulary correctly? If no, circle the words that are used incorrectly. 4. Did your partner use the be going to for future correctly? If no, underline the sentences with incorrect tenses. 5. Are there any misspelled words and incorrect punctuation? If yes, circle the misspelled words and the incorrect punctuation.

Yes

No

4. REWRITING
Tell your partner to revise his or her paragraph based on your feedback. Revise your paragraph on your partner's feedback.

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