McKayla Wheeler REH 101-04 M.

Weaver 13 October 2013 Cover Letter: Literacy Narrative Dear Reader, I would like for you to focus on the flow of events. Do I jump around or is the sequence easily understood? I feel that I presented each event clearly and kept the focus of my paper. I also think I did well on separating out each important event and making the flow of paragraphs match the flow of my growth as a reader and writer. I tried to include my growth in each in every paragraph and tie the two together. I need to work on my introduction and conclusion paragraphs. I think the thesis of my paper is unclear and its hard to identify the focus of my narrative. I also want to improve on some areas that I think are a little wordy. I think I mostly did a good job of using word variation, but there are still a few words that I need to go back and find substitutes for. My narrative is mostly about how education was a major influence on me, but I need to go back through and highlight more family influences.