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Documentary: Did you enjoy the documentary? Yes 13 No 2 Did you learn anything new? Yes 13 No 2 If yes, what?

History of tattooing Statistics That having a tattoo is not a bad thing Different opinions on having tattoos Was the voice over informative enough? Yes 15 No 0 What improvements would you make to the documentary? Sound levels/quality Sudden cuts in interviews and vox pops Framing of some interviews After the first five minutes, would you want to continue to watch the documentary? Yes 11 No 4 Double Page Spread: Is the double page spread aesthetically pleasing? Yes 14 No 1 What do you like about the double page spread? Good images Good connection to the documentary Good colours used Eye catching Conventions used The house style Strong main image Would it encourage you to watch the documentary? Yes 14 No 1

What would you improve? The centre of the page too wide Different font for the masthead Shorter pull quote Thinner graphic lines Change the rhetorical question Title colour The brand new documentary doesnt match red and green? Bolder title Widen the gap between the columns Take away the large red circle Add radio times conventions Smaller image Do you think theres a good link between the double page spread and the documentary? Yes 15 No 0 Radio Trail Did you enjoy the radio trail? Yes 13 No 1 What did you like about the radio trail? The facts Cut away audio Music Appropriate audio from the documentary Good voice over clear Informative Sound level consistent Change of voice Would it encourage you to watch the documentary? Yes 12 No 2 What improvements would you make? Sound levels Link the music with the music in the documentary Less snippets of the vox pops Muffled voice in one of the interviews Use same voice over as in documentary Do you think theres a good link between the radio trail and the documentary? Yes 14 No 0

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