Revision Strategy for Modern-Day Holmes Essay Introduction Add details about the mystery genre Give a short

list of important genre conventions Further explain the role of the sidekick Revise thesis to make it similar, but not exact to the formula given

Analyzing Paragraphs Briefly describe the Elementary scene that is being analyzed (brief, but detailed) Make the definition of lighting and examples flow better Describe what does the lighting show about Watson Knowing that lighting emphasizes Watsons importance, now explain why the character is important Knowing how the camera angle portrays Watson, now explain why Watson is port

Comparison Paragraph Introduce the scene for The Hound of the Baskervilles in a clear way so that a person who hasnt read the story wont get lost/confused

Conclusion Other Small changes (grammar/ revised sentences) Include all stages of the genre development and explain that they are not static Explain how the genre and its conventions have evolved over time

Prioritize 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. Revise thesis to make it similar, but not exact to the formula given Further explain the role of the sidekick Briefly describe the Elementary scene that is being analyzed (brief, but detailed) Make the definition of lighting and examples flow better Describe what does the lighting show about Watson Knowing that lighting emphasizes Watsons importance, now explain why the character is important Knowing how the camera angle portrays Watson, now explain why Watson is portrayed that way Introduce the scene for The Hound of the Baskervilles in a clear way so that a person who hasnt read the story wont get lost/confused Include two stages of the genre development (classical and revisionist) Explain how the genre and its conventions has evolved over time Add details about the mystery genre Give a short list of important genre conventions Small changes (grammar/ revised sentences)