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nuclearweapons.IraqandtheU.Sareworkingtogethertomakesurethatitcanbestoppedbefore thingsgettoobad. Beekmann,2 ThemostpressingissueistheaggressionbetweentheU.S.andtheDPRK(NorthKorea),which couldresultinanotherwaratanymoment(Louis1).ThiscouldbedangerousforIraqbecausethey haveshowedsimilarinterestswiththenuclearprogramalongwiththeU.StowardstheNorthKoreans. TheU.N.SecurityCouncilhasestablishedavarietyofsanctionsonNorthKorea.These sanctionsincludeanembargoonmilitaryandtechnologicalmaterialsandluxurygoods,aswellasaset offinancialsanctions.IraqfullysupportsthesesanctionsgivenbytheU.Nandareanticipatingagood resultfromtheimposedpenalties.SinSonHo(NorthKoreanAmbassador)wasaskedaboutrecent NorthKoreanstatementsinfavorofdenuclearizationoftheKoreanpeninsula.Hestated Denuclearizationisourfinaldestination,(Louis,pg.1)whileinformingthatNorthKoreawouldnot independentlydismantleitsnucleararsenal.Ifthisplanisnotinitiatedcorrectly,thenNorthKoreacould beginanuclearwar.Asolutiontothisissuewouldbetoisolatethem,whenindesperateneedofaid. Thisisdefinitelyabettersolutionthanwar,inwhichIraqcouldnotcompete.IfNorthKoreabeginsto respondnegativelytothesanctionsmilitaryactionmaybeneeded.
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