Simply heartless Writer Saul Saenz Volusia county reporter Name and address withheld Source URL: http://www.news.com.au/world/nor th-america/cara-cox-abducted-in- 2009-reunited-with-florida-mother- jodie-borchert/story-fnh81jut- 1226922819604 DATE AND TIME PUBLISHED: May 19, 2014 1:24PM URL: http://www.theage.com.au/comment/t he-age-letters/denial-of-choice-a- denial-of-basic-human-rights- 20140515- 38cq9.html#ixzz32FWEYVAg DATE PUBLISHED: May 16, 2014 Purpose of article To inform readers the dangers and responsibility of the custody of children. To persuade readers that the new welfare rules really arent fair for the homeless youth trying to find a way in life. Type of article Newspaper Opinion How would you describe the writers approach to relating with the audience? The writer sounds factual and declarative. The writer is unknown, emotional and concerned. The writer is using emotive language, concern and a real life situation to connect with the audience. Level of formality This news report is not that formal, it sounds as though the reporter is explaining a sentence. I believe this opinion piece has more formality than the news report. Key ideas - Should we reconsider the custody of parents? - Cara cox went missing at age 8 in Deltona, Florida, August 2009 in the custody of her father - Cara was found in the remote mountains of hidalgo state, Mexico living with her father in fake names - Is divorce safer for your child?
- Welfare payments are not enough to shelter, feed and educate young people living of welfare. - Should parents just dump their responsibilities? - More should be done to ensure the best for the lives of the youth. Stage Four: Comparing two different media articles
Organisation of ideas The author organised his facts and details in many short sentences. He made the story clear and simple with not too many words. The details in the newspaper articles were organised in an order that made sense. The first few sentences of the article stated the issue and what had happened. The bottom half explained details on the victim and details on how long she has been missing for. The second half of the article also included where she was found.
The author organized her ideas in two separate paragraphs. The first paragraph touched on the issue she was trying to get past by using a situation in her real life. The second paragraph stated the main idea she was trying to get past. Her paragraphs werent that long as this text is an opinion piece and opinion pieces are usually kept short. Although, the opinion piece did have more writing in each paragraph compared to the newspaper article except the newspaper article had more paragraphs. Sentences Type Length Structure This piece was mostly written in declarative writing because this piece was full of facts although there was one imperative sentence in a quote. This piece had long sentences full of facts due to this piece being a newspaper article. Although, this is a newspaper article, most of it was written in an active voice. There was one sentence in a passive voice.
The piece was written with exclamative sentences including on interrogative sentence. It was also declarative as the writer had also provided a brief summary of what had happened in their life. This was very brief because it is an opinion piece. Only active sentences were used in this text as for it is an opinion piece. Language features and word choice One modal (could) has been used in this text. The reason to the newspaper article only having one modal verb is probably because a newspaper article has to include facts and confirmed decisions. Many auxiliaries were used. No This text has 3 modals. The newspaper report also included 3 modals so it seems like the level of formality in both pieces are equal. Many auxiliaries were added. Figurative language like a rhetorical question was included. Sarcasm was included. No puns were
figurative language except one smile (like) has been included. A pun/exaggeration has also been discovered. (Tear -jerking) found. Presentation and formatting A bold, medium sized heading has been situated above the article. Below the heading but still above the article, the time and date the article was published has been shown. Below that, there is a video. After the video, the article consists of information and three images to refer to and understand the text from. The information is ordered from most important to least important facts. The information is organized into small paragraphs consisting of a maximum of three sentences.
A small but emotional heading was included to the article. The article was small too only two paragraphs long. In the first paragraph she included how the problem she wants to state affected her and in the second paragraph it clearly states her problem.