Writing 39B 21 May 2014 Sherlock and Infamous Irene Adler Throughout the years, more and more famous plays and novelssuch as Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare, Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen, and Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronteare being have been reinterpreted and recreated made into as movies and television shows. The combination of visual effects, effective casting, and cinematography creates an experience that cannot be matched by other medium; therefore, re-popularizing the original works and attracting a wider range of audience. However, in an attempting to increase their appeals, most filmmakers modernize the originals in hopes to make them appear more relevant to the modern day audience group. The legendary Sherlock Holmes novels stories by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle are no exception. Classical conventions such as Sherlock Holmes almost robotic characteristics and lack of romantic interests have been revised in order to adapt to the new 21 st
century audience. Back in Sir Arthur Conan Doyles original Sherlock Holmes novels, Holmes is portrayed almost as an automatonas his sidekick, Dr. John Watson, had put it (The Sign 22). He doesnt care for anything other than the thrills and excitements solving cases bring him. Literary scholar, Leroy Panek similarly noted, Doyle applies machine images to Holmes (82). Furthermore, he acknowledges, that Doyle makes Holmes an Comment [KK1]: talk more about the CD texts and its history Comment [KK2]: Give more context to the character of Sherlock Holmes and also include which text you are going to analyze in the thesis Comment [KK3]: Introduce the text as well i.e.: In his book, ____, literary scholar Leroy Panek..... Huang 2 instrument for detection, and that, Holmes fills his cranial attic only with those things which help him solve crimes(82). This is why when Watson mentioned to Holmes how attractive Miss Mary Morstan is, their client in The Sign of the Four, was Holmes simply replied, Is she? I did not observe. Instead of having Holmes say, I didnt notice or I didn't see, Doyle had Holmes say I didnt observe indicating that he saw, he noticed, but he didnt care or keep it in mind as it doesnt help him solve the case. This implies that Mary Morstan, or any women for that matter, is merely a client to him and he can only see her as a client. He was, I take it, the most prefect reasoning and observing machine that the world has seen, but as a lover he would have placed himself in a false position (Adventure 1); Conan Doyle had never portrayed Holmes to fall in love in all of his series, even with the infamous Irene Adler. She, nonetheless, holds a special place in Holmes heart, reflected in A Scandal in Bohemia as it is understood that Holmes considered the photograph of herself that Adler had left behind was more valuable than the kings emerald snake ring (20). Undoubtedly, She was one of the few people who mattered to him because she was one of the only ones to ever outwit Homes; thus, winning his interest and respect. From her, he learned the cost of underestimating the intelligence and capability of women. In his eyes, Watson described, [Irene] eclipses and predominates the whole of her sex (1) her canniness drastically sets her apart from the other Victorian women who tend to be more passive and less educated. He respected her wholeheartedly, but thats all; the romantic element between the two is a later convention filmmakers had incorporated for the enjoyment of modern-day audience. <<<This entire paragraph can be made a little shorter, since this essay's main Comment [KK4]: you should paraphrase easy quotes so the essay looks cleaner Comment [KK5]: try to avoid vague words such as "this" and "that" Comment [KK6]: Give more context of the story, but keep it short Comment [KK7]: lead into the quote; where is this quote from? i.e. An article about blahblah states, .... Huang 3 focus is to analyze the modern texts, not the original CD stories In BBCs adaptation of the Sherlock Holmes series, Sherlock, Holmes relationship with Irene Adler is much more romantic-based. His attraction towards her is largely empathized emphasized throughout The Scandal in Belgravia, the second episode of Season 2. In order to make Sherlock more loveable in todays society, BBC producers created an illusion in which the audience are misled to believe that at one point Sherlock Holmes ha almostif not alreadyfallen for the dominatrix, Irene Adler, and that he had given into the chemical defect found on the losing sidesentiment. In the episode Sherlock Holmes had been asked by his brother, Mycroft, to retrieve Irene Adlers camera phone which contained top-secret information in which she depends her life on. After Sherlock Holmes learned that Irene Adler had faked her death and found her in 221B Baker St., he gets too carried away in Adlers challenges and cracks the code for her and unknowingly ruins MODs ploy. Because of his previous encounter with Irene Adler and the trick she played on his concerning the passcode to her camera phone, Sherlock wanted to get back on her badly; thus, when she admits to not being able to understand the code he quickly deciphers it without questioning. During the scene, the camera is mainly focused on Sherlock and Irenealmost a whip panwith the occasional shots of John Watson from time to time implying how focused in their world the couple were. <<awkward wording Also, Irenes shots are mostly low-angled indicating that shes the one in control of the situation. This helps her come across as really intelligent and confident and its no doubt to the audience Sherlock Holmes would be attracted to her. In addition, its also possible that Sherlock might have been aware of Comment [KK8]: shorten the summary Comment [KK9]: Remember to refer to characters by last name in a scholarly essay Formatted: Highlight Huang 4 his confounded feelings towards her and thats why he doesnt trick her to give him the passcode with his usual intensity, but rather, as John astutely points out, went with the flow, letting her play her game which ultimately creates the sense of the two flirting, and when Irene outsmarts Sherlock, forcing him to give her back her camera phone, he just drops the whole thing and hands it to her, with a compliment, Oh, youre quite good, whereas hed normally forces it out of the person. This romantic element is included because it is what todays audience group desires. <<You should talk more about other cinematic elements in the scene, such as the music, sound, lighting, etc. In the movie Sherlock Holmes directed by Guy Ritchie starring Robert Downey Jr. and Jude Law, it is presented so that at Irene Adler and Sherlock Holmes first encounter the audience can straight off seereveals to the audience that there was a romantic history between the two. The scene starts off with Sherlock waking up to Irene checking out his flat. Unlike the BBC or original Conan Doyle version, Irene Adler had divorced her husband, whom she had described as boring, jealous, and prone to snoring. This indicates the power Irene Adler has and sets her apart right off the bat since back in the Victorian Era, which is the setting of the movie, women had no say in anything let allow file for divorce. In those daysDuring the Victorian era, once a woman is married, she is most likely to be married to her husband until he dies or divorces her. The fact that Irene was the one who divorced him would be unimaginable to Conan Doyle. Furthermore, how Irene criticizes of her former husband would not have been acceptable in that time period. Her assertiveness is also a later convention since thats what todays society had sculptured an attractive and desirable woman to be: to have Comment [KK10]: what scene? Comment [KK11]: strays slightly away from your main point about the romantic aspect of the modern day texts Huang 5 personality, is independent, confident, and intelligent. As Irene and Sherlock discusses the reason for Irenes unexpected visit, the shots are at almost the same levelunlike the BBC versionsuggesting that Guy Ritchie wants the audience to see the two as equals. Contrasting the flirting and fighting for control, this version the movie portrays more of a partners-in-crime, best friend relationship between the couple since that is more relatable to the audience group. The movie also relies more on the characters facial expressions to set the romantic and flirtatious mood whereas the television show relies on the words. This is why the shots are mostly close-ups and the whip pan scene rather than a stationary with camera shooting the two facing each other, talking. The close-ups highlight the actors detailed and specific facial expressions luring the audience in creating an experience readers wouldn't able to experience by just reading the books. <<again, include more cinematic elements in your scene analysis Different conventions are both added and revised in unique ways from the original works of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, as changes are needed since people and society interprets things differently than before. <<awkward wording These revisions in both the characters of Sherlock Holmes and Irene Adler are fit to suit the bold and unique preference of the audience of modern-day society. <<Dr. Haas said this in my essay, but I think you should find a movie reviewer and comment about the popularity of the show
**remember to refer to characters by their last names talk about more cinematic elements Comment [KK12]: the camera shots? Describe it as camera angles Comment [KK13]: remember to be specific Comment [KK14]: how is it more relatable to the audience group? Give details! Comment [KK15]: avoid using contractions Formatted: Highlight Huang 6 In the paragraph where you talked about the movie, choose a specific scene instead of talking about generalizations about how Sherlock and Irene's relationship was portrayed in the films
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