Objections:

This topic has been researched quite a lot. You may provide strong justification to convince that the
purpose of the study is worth exploring. You may select some of unique variables from contextual
environment to highlight the significance of the study.
It would be appreciated, if you can make a comparison between colleges university employees. You will
have to make comparison of the result of inferential statistics from both populations to any similarities
and differences.
Methodology needs to be clear. Provide details about sample size, sampling type and instrument.
Explain the complete procedure to instrument development in methodology part whether self
development or adopted from external source. Attach questionnaire as appendix.