Fernando Herrera Flores 3-C Matutino 1 de septiembre del 2014

CATEGORY 4
Excellent
3
Good
2
Regular
1
Needs
improvement

TITLE



Interesting title
The title is not
interesting enough
The title is not related to
the topic
The title is missing
INTRODUCTION
PARAGRAPH
1
State the topic so clearly
(summary of the topic
without giving your
opinion.)
State the topic a little
bit clearly (summary of
the topic without giving
your opinion.)
State the topic but it is
confusing.
You do not state
the topic.
PARAGRAPH
2
write the pros of the topic
with supporting details
using the linking words in
correct way ( to begin
with
in addition, furthermore)
there are justifications,
examples and/or reasons
write the pros of the
topic with supporting
details using the linking
words in correct way
( to begin with, in
addition, furthermore)
There are a few
justifications and
examples.
Write the pros of the
topic with supporting
details using just two
linking words. The
justifications or examples
are not clearly
The pros are not
enough and the
linking words are
not used correctly.
PARAGRAPH
3
Write the cons with
supporting details. using
the linking words in
correct way (however, for
example, furthermore
etc)
there are justifications
examples and/or reasons
Write the cons with
supporting details.
using the linking words
in correct way
(however, for example,
furthermore etc)
there are a few
justifications and
examples
Write the cons of the
topic with supporting
details using just two
linking words. The
justifications or examples
are not clearly.
The cons are not
enough and the
linking words are
not used correctly.
PARAGRAPH
4
CONCLUSION
Summarize the main
points you mentioned and
state your opinion using
appropriate transitions(
all in all, to sum up, in
conclusion etc)
Summarize the main
points you mentioned
and state your opinion
but you do not use an
appropriate transitions
( all in all, to sum up, in
conclusion etc)
Summarize the main
points you mentioned.
You do not
Summarize the
main points you
mentioned.
SENTENCES &
PARAGRAPHS

Sentences and paragraphs
are complete, well-
constructed and of varied
structure. The linking
words are using correctly.

All sentences are
complete and well-
constructed
Paragraphing is
generally done well.
Most sentences are
almost well-constructed.
Paragraphing needs
some work.
Many sentence
fragments or run-
on sentences OR
paragraphing
needs lots of work
Grammar
&Spelling
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There are less th

you applied the grammar
correctly and words are
spelled correctly
There are 3-6 words
spelled incorrectly but
all assigned words are
spelled correctly.
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Too many grammar error
and words are spelled
incorrectly.
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Most words are s

Most words are
spelled incorrectly
with little evidence
of knowledge og
grammar.
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Fernando Herrera Flores 3-C Matutino 1 de septiembre del 2014
Factual writing: Write an article about the pros and cons of a Job
StudentS name: _Fernando Herrera Flores
teacherS name: mc claudia Rodrguez Rosas- Agosto
Contains little evid

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Fernando Herrera Flores 3-C Matutino 1 de septiembre del 2014
Looking towards the future


What does a Mechatronics Engineer? Well, this race gives us the profession ofengineer in different a
reas because this race is the set of other computingRobotics among others as a new race of approxi
mately 3 years ago. It
isnecessary to have knowledge of computing and mathematics, be very artistic.creative. passionate
and perfectionist



This race has some advantages to begin with one of the first is that in spite ofbeing a new career is t
o become one of the most important worldwide sinceall technologies depend
on this.Another advantage is that technology movesvery fast and this race is mainly based on the cr
eation of machines to helppeople to make their lives more comfortable. Finally an engineer in this a
reathat it is very good paid has the opportunities to help people.

Good as everything has its advantages and its disadvantages among theirmajor disadvantages we
have that in Mechatronics Engineering is veryexpensive in private universities to Yes if you don't hav
e money you'd have tolook for a University public if it would
be almost impossible to study this race.Another important disadvantage is that in Mexico if there
are opportunities towork but most of the people must have a family
member to enter thiscompany if it
is not very difficult to further that the salaries are very lowcompared to other countries.

In my opinion, this work is one of the best that there is in the world becauseyou
must have knowledge of everything in this life and in this race can doanything within the area of tec
hnology and this is the main base for thedevelopment of society. I recommend this race because it
is one of the bestpaid to others that if technology like this race is for you that you can help thesocie
ty.