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Hofstedes
Dimension Paper
THE UNIVERSITY OF KANSAS
AIMI NAKAZAWA

Aimi Nakazawa
COMS 246
Hofstedes Interview
October 7, 2014

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Hofstedes Interview
Do you know familiar with well about athe country which has really different culture?

page, you can put whatever you wish o


it, but it is a requirement.
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(Do you know anything about different cultures?) In Saudi Arabia, the men wear a long white

between your lines is too big, please try


to reduce it.

robe and puts scarves cloth on their head, which is traditionally called thobe and shemagh,
and women put black scarvescloth over their body and head, which is called abaya. This
country has a lot of different cultures, customs, and traditions. Specifically for relationships

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well doesnt fit the best.

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here.

between family, friends, and romantic ones, Saudi Arabia has many interesting characters that

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here.

both support and


differentiate from the Hofstedes dimensions. I chose Hofstedes power distance

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work for what you are saying, change a


the cloth words into another word.

dimension to explain, then I analyze the interview which I asked my friends from Saudi
Arabia. Some results from interview can support Hofstedes dimensions, but some cannot
apply for Hofstedes dimensions.
The person who I interviewed is my friend, Hassan. He is my best friends friend,
and I became friends with him through our friends. Ive known him for about 4 months. He is
from Saudi Arabia and he is a Muslim. He is an Arabic speaker, but he studies at The
University of Kansas, so he also can speak English. I interviewed him at friends house, when
all my friends were hanging out together. I asked him about his countrys family, friendships,
and romantic relationships. He liked talking about his culture, speaking about his family and

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introduction it seems good, but try to a

more detail to the end of the introducti


For example, tell me what your final

conclusion was in the paper, which one


Hofstedes dimensions you will talk

about, and whether or not the dimensi


fit what the person you interviewed
discussed.

his friends. He understands many things about his culture, and he is also interested in culture,

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good.you can maybe add more detail


about how the conversation went.

so he positively answer my questions.


I chose the Cultural Dimension for about power distance. Power distance points out
peoples approval for having inequalities in hierarchical social structures. The range extent

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not fit here.

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is your source of information? You need

that people recognize status inequality is good or bad, right or wrong, just or unjust, and fair

to cite the source.


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and unfair. Usually, the country with a Low Power Distance has a Social/Class Inequality that

mean the same thing, you do not need


both words.

is minimized, authority that is challenged, and a reduced hierarchy.(lecture slide). On the


other hand, a country which is classified into High Power Distance tends to consider a
Social/Class Inequality as beneficial, accept authority, and think of hierarchy as appropriate..

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need to cite your source again.

(lecture slide) For example, with family relationships, children are expected to obey their
parents without challenge in a high power distance culture, but in a low power distance
culture, children are taught to seek reasons or justifications for parents actions. IIn business
situation, in high power distance cultures, when they work,

subordinates expect to be

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closely supervised, but people in low power distance expect autonomy and a participative
decision making style(lecture slide). Power is defined as the degree to which a person is
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able to influence other peoples ideas and behaviors. (lectureclass slides) The Hofstedes

lecture notes.look up on the Interne


how to cite lecture notes in APA style

dimensions of the power distance refers to how people define themselves and their

in-text, and you should be able to find


examples.

relationship with others(lecture slide). The collectivistic culture places importance on a

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section is okay, you need to cite your

group

activity,

and

the

individualistic

culture

emphasizes

individual

activities.

sources more clearly and work on the

grammar, but the information is correc

Masculinity/Femininity refers to the extent to which people value achievement and


nurturance (lecture slide). Masculinity culture people think achievement is important and
they have distinct gender roles, but Femininity culture people try to service to others and they
have fluid gender roles (lecture slide).
The first of my examples that support Hofstedes dimension is about
Individualism/Collectivism. From observation from the interview, Hassan lives together with
all his family members, and he values friendship a lot. Also he mentioned his culture has a
strong family connection throughout their lifetime, and his culture has a stronger bond than
the culture in the United States. This shows his countrytheir country is collectivisticsm
culture. According to the Hofstedes dimension, , the Individualism in Saudi Arabias score

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nowhere! If you want to discuss other

dimensions, you also need to write abo

them in the paragraph aboveotherwi


it is too surprising when you start
talking about individualism /
collectivism because you just finished
talking about power distance, with no
transition.
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is 25 (. The Hofstede Centre). It means Saudi Arabia has a highly collectivism culture.

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specifically, is this a book source, a

However, Hassan said he does not have to ask his parents before he decides big things. Also
he mentioned that forin a friendships, people do not have to compromise with their friends
when they are together. They can do their own things as they want. T

This does not relate to

website, or a lecture?
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the Hofstedes Individual/Collectivism dimension. The second example is about


Masculinity/Femininity. He said his family has a distinct gender role.s. Fathers do the job for
providing for the family, and mothers are in charge of taking care of their family. Masculine
culture has a distinct gender roles, so it means Saudi Arabia is a Masculine culture. But

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information about the dimension in the

second section of the paper, so that it is


not a surprise when I see it here.
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Hofstedes dimension shows Saudi Arabias Masculinity score is 60. (The Hofstede Centre).

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It is close to the United States (The Hofstede Centre), and Hofstede states that Saudi Arabian
culture is not a masculine culture. He also said people do not live in order to work, but people
place importance on achievement or competitions.. People who do not live to work means the
culture is not a masculinity culture, but people puts importance on achievement means his

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Cite your information as an in-text
citation.

culture is masculinity. So this means his one opinion does not apply for masculine culture of
Hofstedes dimension, but his another opinion can apply for masculine culture of Hofstedes
dimension. So, it cannot be said that

my my example

does not support that aspect of

Hofstedes research completely. The third of my examples is related to High Power Distance.
Hassan stated that there is a family structure in his family. The father is the first, then the
mother, and the next is older brother/sister. Usually, in a High Power Distance culture people

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your example does not support this. If
you look at the rubric, you need to be

clear on why your examples do or do no


support Hofstede.

think hierarchy is appropriate. Hofstedes research shows that Saudi Arabias Power
Distance point is 95 (The Hofstede Centre). This mean his culture puts importance on power
distance, and according to his opinion, people in his culture think hierarchy is appropriate. .
So, my example supports Hofstedes research.
I did learned not only about the culture of Saudi Arabia, but also about the
difference between Saudi Arabia, the United States, and Japan. I expected that Saudi Arabian
culture is applied for is High Power Distance, Collectivisticsm, and Masculinity before
knowing about their culture. Actually, some my expectations are the same as Hofstedes
dimensions and my examples, but I learned they are more feminine than I expected. In

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got the 90 for power distance, and
explain more on how this example
supports the research.
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addition, through the interview I did, the things about which I was surprised is rwas romantic

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relationships. In Saudi Arabia, dating before getting married is not common and it is
prohibited. For Japanese, dating is a normal thing, so it is hard for me to imagine no one is
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dating before getting married.


In conclusion,

about

good, you can always give more details

Collectivism/Individualism,

Hofstedes dimension, but some examples do not. t,Also about

some

examples supports

and it can be also applied for

Masculinity, there are both examples which support and do not support. bHoweverut my
example for High Power Distance supports the Hofstedes dimension. From now on, when I
interact with Saudi Arabian people, I can use these examples and dimensions to build up

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confusing, try to make it sound a little
clearer.

friendships, and avoid conflict.


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The Hofstede Centre. Retrieved October 6, 2014 from


http://geert-hofstede.com/saudi-arabia.html

Lecture Slide. Retrieved October 6, 2014

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Comment [IR36]: You need a separate
page for your references, and also cite
the lecture slides here too, since you
cited them as an in-text citation.