VIP Resume Service | Task number: 4025

NOTES:
Hello there! Thanks so much for buying the MyDocumate VIP Resume service. As specified on
your order form, Im working towards a one-page resume. Accordingly, I have prepared a
suitable framework that will suit your background and filled in the information youve offered in
various areas. Ive included various placeholders, which should indicate where additional
descriptive detail is needed.

Friendly note,
explaining
whats been
done.

Please confirm the following:

You are applying for:

M.S. degree at the University of Pennsylvania (state

Masters program you want to apply to)

Your developmental stage:

You are an undergraduate from Tianjin University majoring

in Materials Science and Engineering.

In terms of the next draft, the most important things for you to think about are
You want your Resume to highlight your potential in relation to the program and
differentiate it from other applicants.
1. Please provide me with as much specific, measurable detail as you possibly can; this is
particularly effective in resumes when preparing the narrative items, for example:
Bad narrative detail:
I helped customers in the reception area
Better narrative detail:
My role in the customer service function involved handling up to 30 clients per day,
and up to five clients at any given time, offering them information as needed; adapted
knowledge to address specific issues, such as missed deadlines, payment questions,
difficulties in operating the relevant systems, in a timely and efficient manner,
achieving a 90% approval rating from clients.
Of course, this could all be made even more specific and more effective, depending on
how much information is offered!
2. Try to think about the skills youve acquired, eg: Its great if youre a good team-player,
but try to give me information that demonstrates youre a good team-player! eg: Think
about a time when youve worked well in a team, describe it to me; describe what you
did and what made it so effective!

Use these if it helps

this is all here to
make your life easier
and help the clientif
it doesnt accomplish
one or both of those
things, dont worry
about it. This applies
generally.

3. When telling me about your key accomplishments, please provide as many titles,
competition names, award names and other official details regarding the things youve
achieved: The resume is an ideal place to show off official certification and recognition.
4. Please provide me as much information as you can about (a) positions of responsibility
you held, and (b) what responsibilities those positions entailed.
5. Especially useful will be information that tells me about where you have got the idea to
apply for this programwhat experiences have informed this decision?
6. It may be helpful to include an objective/summary at the beginning of your resume; if you
agree please tell me what you hope to accomplish in your target program. Heres an
example to show you what I mean:
7. Bad objective:
To study at a top engineering school and obtain a Masters Degree. It is too general.
Better objective:
To acquire the necessary skills as a suitable springboard to an international engineering
career in modern materials practice.
Of course, the more specific and the more tailored to your target program, the better this
will be!
8. I hope this helps and Im really looking forward to your input!
All the best!
(The initial suggested framework for your resume is on the next page.)

Addresses the material

in the VIP questionnaire.
Areas in your background that you should expand on to populate the framework below:
I got very good grades on nearly all my upper division classes which are core for my major
Please let me know those classes and your scores.

Uses it as a basis to ask

I am always the leader for our group project and lead our group make excellent
specific questions. Taking
presentations Can you tell me about the most important, impressive and recent group
work youve done. What was it that makes you a good leaderbe specific and use a generalplease fill in
examples when responding to this?
this template approach
material science \ I am very interested in biological materials Do you have an specific
doesnt have much value
experiencesprojects, lab-work, internshipsfrom which this interest derives?
or make the client feel like
This sounds like commendable workwere you doing this with some sort of outreach organization at your
theyre being looked after.
school? Give me more context. Do you consider this one of your most important extracurricular activities?
Yes. I used to help my fellow students who major in art to find appropriate materials for
their design of a model. I did some research about the mechanical properties and their
appearance of certain plastic to meet their demand for an art model.The plastic is very
easy to process and convenient for their design. Thence their design was very successful
due to my advice for choice of raw materials I went back to my high school with my friends
in other school In the college who was my high school classmate. We did some promotion
about our university and share the lives in our college with students of our high school. We
answered some questions of them about our university. And the next year some of them
are admitted by our university.I help my university
More questions below!!

Go on to ask more in the document framework

SHUJIAN HOU
email@email.com | +86 XXX XXXX XXXX
Address, Address, Address, PRC

SUMMARY OF ACHIEVEMENTS AND OBJECTIVES

!EDUCATION & AWARDS!
Tianjin University

Xx.Xx- Xx.Xx

B.S. in Materials Science and Engineering | GPA: 3.22/4.00 | Ranking: XX

Research:
XXXX
Publications:
Prizes:

Author
Comment [2]: Ranking if any

XXXX

Author
Comment [3]: Describe the research projects
in detail here.

XXXX

!PROFESSIONAL BACKGROUND!
Xxxx
Intern
!
!

Xx.Xx- Xx.Xx

XX
XX

Xxxx
Xxxx
!
!

XXXX
XXXX

Xxxx
Intern

Xx.Xx- Xx.Xx

XX
XX

Xxxx
XXXX
!
!

Author
Comment [4]: Include any work experience
here.

Xx.Xx- Xx.Xx

!EXTRACURRICULAR!
!
!

Author
Comment [1]: 3-4 sentences about your
objectives, qualifications, and achievements.
Please be specific. E.g. Top ranked student in
Materials science for award winning project.

Author
Comment [5]: Put details of any information
pertaining to student committee, class monitor,
internships, social or volunteer work or any
related activities beyond academics.

Xx.Xx- Xx.Xx

XXXX
XXXX

!OTHER SKILLS!
Languages:
Computers:

Mandarin Chinese (native); English (TOEFL 101); XXX.

XXX.

Author
Comment [6]: Details of languages studied
and all computer programs you are proficient in.