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I THINK FOR YOU VERY LAST BULLET POINT YOU CAN GET RID OF THE AS NEEDED
I DONT THINK IT IS NEEDED TO BE CONCISE
I THINK YOU YOUR USE SPACE IN A GREAT WAY, BY PUTTING YOUR PERSONAL INFORMATION SEPARATE FROM YOUR NAME IT
MAKES THE HEADER SEEM ROOMIER
BUT IF ANYTHING I AM NOT QUITE SURE YOU NEED TO WRITE THE CITITES THAT YOU WORKED IN.
LASTLY PROFESSOR RECCOMENDS YOU ADD A PERIOD TO MAKE POINTS SEEMS FINALIZED ALTHOUGH YOU MIGHT WANT TO
LOOK AT MARKEL TO A MORE CERTAIN ANSWER.
OVERALL YOUR LANGAUGE SEEMS TO BE GREAT EVERYTHING IS IN THE CORRECT TENSE AND YOU USED YOUR SPACE
EFFECTIVELY EVERYTHING DOES NOT SEEM TO BE CLUTTERED