sheriff njie

Mr. king
1st. period
10-7-14
The Crimean revolution
Once upon a time there was a dog named Ropeue. Ropeue was the opposite of eye candy;
He had an orange green fur and one tooth in his mouth. He had large discolored bald spots, and
the stench that came off him made birds fall out of the sky and dung beetles scurry in the
opposite direction, but that's not even the worst of it. On the back of the dog lived thousands of
ticks each in their own kingdom ruled by their own king. Each king desired more land to acquire
as much fur and blood to build and trade with the other kings.
One day a tick that goes by the name Phertochrist Buslumco approached the King and
Queen of Donlon with a new trade route. The King and Queen intrigued funded his plans and
they sent him off. A year went by before Phertochrist returned, but the wait was worth it.
Phertochrist came back with news nobody expected. I have discovered a new dog! He said.
She's as white as the pearls in sea with brown spots that complimented her greatly. Her teeth
were like stars in the night sky. She had wings that shined in the light, and fur thats long and
graceful. She was a big dog, long and slender. He named her Carimea.
In a few months time the king and queen sent multiple groups of ticks to go and build
colonies in Carimea. In a year, 13 colonies were established with the help of easily controlled
ticks sole and traded from Cariaf their home kingdom. These ticks are white all over except for
their superb multi colored legs which were constantly conditioned due to the labor they endured
for an oppressed life.

Our hero comes in on the 25th of December. A boy Egroeg Tonshingwa was born on a
family plantation at Popes Creek Westmoreland County in the colony of Anigiver. Egroeg is not
the scariest tick out there but he can hold his own, he had the shape of any other tick round with
a gray blood pouch but his back was littered with spring colors, his legs have grown strong after
his father died leaving him with the task of taking care of the plantation. Egroeg is now 17 and
the oldest of five. He is currently working as a surveyor exploring the mighty dog slowly
mapping her out. At age 20 he was made a commander in the Anigiver militia with no previous
military experience, but later he was in charge of the entire Anigiver militia, He also fought in
two wars lead by Donlon, after 7 years he resigned and started a family.
At first everything was fine but the King of Donlon also named Egroeg, a man that would
cut off his own legs for money, added some unfavorable rules, first he said Carimea could only
trade with his kingdom, but at half the cost second he implored the blood and print act which
added new high taxes but the worst addition that aggravated the colonist was the immense
number of soldiers named red fangs from the kings army. These ticks constantly disrespected the
colonists often displaying violence to keep the colonists in check. These men can strike fear from
3 miles away. Their mouths constantly chatter clack clack as they roam the streets thirsty for
blood. The colonist had become resentful of their home kingdom they didn't like someone so far
away telling them what to do. The tension between Carimea and Donlon grew exponentially, but

the event that sparked the flames of war was the slaughter of five ticks by the Red Fangs in
Tonbus colony.
Tonshingwa became a delegate in the first continental congress for Carimean
independence. A year later the Carimean revolution began, and Tonshingwa was named

commander in chief of the Continental Army. The conditions on the battlefield where not exactly
favorable, the soldiers were constantly spending time in the wilderness where many of them
became ill. Diseases like the reaper, an illness that targets the immune system and creates oozing
bubbles all over the body, then spreads through the ranks like fur fires. Winter was especially
unforgiving because without proper materials the wind would lash out chilling every fiber of
your body. Tonshingwa had the power to make any tick feel like they can go to hell and back.
This was extremely crucial, for the men he lead could barely tell the back from the front of the
gun to. The soldiers spirits were often low but Tonshingwa riled them up and gave their morals
a well needed boost.
At first it didnt look so good, because Carimea had lost many battles, but then they
received help from the longtime rivals of the kingdom of Donlon the Renchf. The Renchf
supplied weapons, ammunitions, and other supplies to the Carimeans. Tonshingwa and his men
began to turn this war around. They acquired their first major win at the battle of thigh vain,
Tonshingwa and his troops left the campfires during the night to make it seem like they were
sleeping while they surrounded the troops of Donlon and attacked right before sunrise, this raised
all the soldiers moral. The second win was held at the battle of left ear; the Carimerians pinned,
and surrounded the Donlons after forcing them to retreat. After four more battle, three won and
one lost they arrive at blood town for a final battle. Tonshingwa and the Renchf lead a bizarre 20
day siege on general Liswalcorns and his men. Above the battlefield hovered angry clouds
glaring and growing with the bloodshed and tears to come, nevertheless the fighting continued.
The Carimeans first hit them with bombardments then two columns of ticks were sent to destroy
the Red Fangs. The heavy fire exhausted and diminished Liswalcorn and his men. On the 20th
day it rained, and Liswalcorn surrendered leading to the capture of 7,000 Donlon troops. Shortly

after the victory on the first day of spring, negotiations between Donlon and Carimea began
leading to the treaty of lice, which ended the Carimean revolution and gave them their
independence.
After the war a victory feast attended by all the people of Carimea was held to celebrate
Tonshingwa and his men. They ate, they danced, and they kept the dog up all night. A few
months later Tonshingwa lead the continental congress in Aphidellaphi to write a new
constitution. It stated all ticks are created equal and the future operation of the new government
of Carimeria. Carimeria was finally a kingdom of its own it could trade with anyone they deem
fit. The Red Fangs were sent back home and they had plenty of fur and blood from a healthy
dog. Freedom was now theirs and they could no longer be oppressed. Tonshingwa was
eventually named president of Carimeria. Carimeria with its newly found labor force stretched
from the eastern edge of the dog to Feline River but it would eventually grow and spread from
the eastern side to the western side.