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An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
classmate:
Collection advertisement
are definitely seen as
genre because they follow
a strict set of conventions
and there are certain
expectations when one
hears the word collection
advertisement.
Advertisements, as
explained later
throughout the paper, are
distinguished by many
details, but two are bold
format and attractive
language. The
conventions of collection
advertisements are
important because of their
daily purpose to
communicate messages to
audiences.
(a phrase, sentence,
paragraph, idea, move,
punctuation, piece of
evidence, etc.)
Although each
advertisement
demonstrates each of the
collections products, it
shows a disparate [ZD1]
color scheme and text.
Although each
advertisement
demonstrates each of the
collection products, it
shows a unique color
scheme and text.
[ZD1]Iglesias, right
now youre doing a
super-solid job of
describing these
products, but Im not
quite sure WHY.
What are you trying
to get across in this
paper? What about
these products are
you trying to argue??
(And how does it
specifically relate to
genre?)
These advertisements
specifically represent
one industry or the
partner of the industry.
Viewing the impacts
and conventions of
genre, one can see how
learning genre is
important to translate
and find meanings to
different genres.
By adding a smoother
transitional phrase, it
seems to clarify my
thought process.
Before making this
change, it seemed my
thoughts and
connections were
foggy; the audience
does not know
exactly what Im
trying to say, so I
need to try and guide
These advertisements
specifically represent one
industry or the partner of
the industry.
Learning genre is crucial
to the learning
experience[ZD1]
ZD1]Whats the
specific link between
sentence 1 and
sentence 2? Whatever
that is, considering
putting it into the start
of sentence 2. (At the
end of sentence 1 is
another option.)
Right now, its an
abrupt, not-so-smooth
transition.
them with my
analysis.
Connecting back to my
topic and the purpose of
my paper seems to be
one of my biggest
issues. By referring
back to topic, I dont
lose my flow and my
audience will stay intact
with what how Im
connecting my analysis
to my subject of the
paper.
My paper is more
clarified once I take
time to rephrase some
sentences correctly.
Sometimes after reading
it through, all my
thoughts make sense in
my head, but the
audience does not
respond the same way.