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11.
You wanted me to describe what a good identity is. I was
able to add in two sentences explaining what a good identity is.
It is hard to explain because everyone has his or her own
definition when it comes to good. I explained it in the best way
I could here for the audience.
12.
I decided to re-do the last two paragraphs of my conclusion
based off of your feedback. I felt those paragraphs didnt really
conclude my paper. I decided to add in how the sources I
described related to my first research question and answer the
question. I figured if I addressed my research questions I must
actually answer the question for my audience.
13.
I decided to also add in another paragraph pertaining to
my second research question. You had suggested relating my
sources to my research questions so I decided to do it. I believe if
I bring them up in the beginning I must answer them and show
what sources connect to it.