Dennys is cool

Best restaurant
Dennys is cool

Do you like to eat all different kinds of food from different counties then this
is the best restaurant for you. The food over at Dennys is very good to eat
with your family. Dennys is also a place to be with your family and to have
some fun with your family. Dennys has all different kinds of food you can eat
with your family. Its fun to be at Dennys because its fun to be with your
family. The foods from different countries are very well made by the people
who cook the food at Dennys.
The pizza is very good at Dennys because there are lots of different toppings
you can put on your pizza. If you havent tasted it you have to. Dennys even
more good food that you can eat. The food is very good like the burgers and
the sandwiches taste good when you eat it.
The drinks taste very good because there are flavor dinks. Would you go to a
restaurant that has discussing food and you have to eat it and you have to
drink the discussing. The drinks come in different kinds of flavors. The food
smells very good, and the food taste very well. The pizza, burgers, sandwich,
and salad taste good because the people who make the food make the food
very good. The drinks taste very good because there are flavor dinks. Would
you go to a restaurant that has discussing food and you have to eat it and
you have to drink the discussing.
The cleanliness is very nice just because it looks like a town it doesnt
mean its dirty but its really clean. They always leave the restaurant clean
night and day. The restaurant is not dirty place its all clean. People dont
want to eat at a place that is dirty place. People would just leave if its dirty.
You can have fun with you family and you can eat all of these different kinds
of food with your family. You can have lots of fun with your family. You dont
want to be at a restaurant that you cant have fun with your family. You dont
also want to be at a restaurant that you cant eat all of these different kinds
of food together.

The best restaurant is Dennys because you can eat all of different foods
together with your family. You can have lots of fun with your family. I wish I
was right there now because it is really fun and there is lots of food.

Opinion Writing Rubric

Statement Of
Purpose/Focus

4
The response is fully
sustained and consistently
and purposefully focused:
opinion is clearly stated,
focused, and strongly
maintained
opinion is communicated
clearly within the context

3
The response is adequately
sustained and generally
focused:
opinion is clear and for the
most part maintained,
though some loosely related
material may be present
context provided for the
claim is adequate

2
The response is somewhat
sustained with some
extraneous material or a
minor drift in focus:
may be clearly focused on
the opinion but is
insufficiently sustained
opinion on the issue may
be unclear and unfocused

1
The response may be
related to the purpose but
may offer little or no focus:
may be very brief
may have a major drift
opinion may be confusing
or ambiguous

Organization

The response has a clear

and effective organizational
structure creating unity and
completeness:
effective, consistent use of
a variety of transitional
strategies
logical progression of ideas
from beginning to end
effective introduction and
conclusion for audience and
purpose

The response has an

inconsistent organizational
structure, and flaws are
evident:
inconsistent use of
transitional strategies with
little variety
uneven progression of
ideas from beginning to end
conclusion and
introduction, if present, are
weak

The response has little or no

discernible organizational
structure:
few or no transitional
strategies are evident
frequent extraneous ideas
may intrude

Elaboration of Evidence

The response provides

thorough and convincing
support/evidence for the
writers opinion that includes
the effective use of sources,
facts, and details:
use of evidence from
sources is smoothly
integrated, comprehensive,
and relevant
effective use of a variety of
elaborative techniques

The response has a

recognizable organizational
structure, though there may
be minor flaws and some
ideas may be loosely
connected:
adequate use of
transitional strategies with
some variety
adequate progression of
ideas from beginning to end
adequate introduction and
conclusion
The response provides
adequate support/evidence
for the writers opinion that
includes the use of sources,
facts, and details:
some evidence from
sources is integrated, though
citations may be general or
imprecise
adequate use of some
elaborative techniques

The response provides

uneven, cursory
support/evidence for the
writers opinion that includes
partial or uneven use of
sources, facts, and details:
evidence from sources is
weakly integrated, and
citations, if present, are
uneven
weak or uneven use of
elaborative techniques

The response provides

minimal support/evidence for
the writers opinion that
includes little or no use of
sources, facts, and details:
use of evidence from
sources is minimal, absent,
in error, or irrelevant

Language and
Vocabulary

The response clearly and

effectively expresses ideas,
using precise language:
use of academic and
domain-specific vocabulary
is clearly appropriate for the
audience and purpose

The response adequately

expresses ideas, employing
a mix of precise with more
general language:
use of domain-specific
vocabulary is generally
appropriate for the audience
and purpose

The response expresses

ideas unevenly, using
simplistic language:
use of domain-specific
vocabulary that may at times
be inappropriate for the
audience and purpose

The response expression of

ideas is vague, lacks clarity,
or is confusing:
uses limited language or
domain-specific vocabulary
may have little sense of
audience and purpose

Conventions

The response demonstrates

a strong command of
conventions:
few, if any, errors in usage
and sentence formation
effective and consistent
use of punctuation,

The response demonstrates

an adequate command of
conventions:
some errors in usage and
sentence formation are
present, but no systematic
pattern of errors is displayed

The response demonstrates

a partial command of
conventions:
frequent errors in usage
may obscure meaning
inconsistent use of
punctuation, capitalization,

The response demonstrates

a lack of command of
conventions:
errors are frequent and
severe and meaning is often
obscured

capitalization, and spelling

adequate use of
punctuation, capitalization,
and spelling

and spelling

12/20 = 60% There were many places in this piece where you repeated yourself. You used the word good a lot in your piece. It didnt look like you revised
or edited this piece. The introduction and conclusion was pretty good, but you didnt back up your reasons in your body paragraph.