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Date:28October2014
TypeofWriting:PersonalNarrative
ThepartofmywritingthatIammostproudofis:paragraphing,becausethatwasmygoalandIlike
neatness.
Imadethefollowingrevisionstomywriting:spelling,punctuationandparagraphing.
SomethingIlearnedwhilewritingthispieceis:thementalmoviestrategyisprettyusefulbecauseifyou
canimagineyoucanwriteit.
Mygoalformynextpieceofwritingis:puttingmorepunctuationandstopdoingrunalongsentences.