Autobiography

My name is Paola Corredor Perez, Im eighteen years old. Im from

Villavicencio, Colombia. I was born in April 4 of 1996. My mothers
name is Blanca Edy Perez and my fathers name is Jorge Corredor. I
have one sister, her name is Laura Valentina and she is seven years
old.
I lived in Villavicencio for sixteen years, since I was born. There, I
studied in four schools. I have a lot of friends. In my last school, I
studied from 6th grade to 11th grade; the name of my last school is Liceo
Campestre de las Americas. I graduated on December 2 nd of 2012; I
was so excited for leave the school.
In January of 2013 I arrived to Bogota, here Id study Law; in Santo
Toms University. I begin in January 14th. Is a difficult change but the
best experience, now Im finishing 4th semester. I love my career and I
hope to become in a good Lawyer.
Now, in my little free time I go to the gym also I really love to listen
house music, and to go to DJ sets; my favorite DJ is Axwell, Im very
happy for having recently met him.I like to see and play tennis, my
favorite tennis player is Roger Federer, hes the best in history.
My life is the normal life of a girl, I like to share with my family and my
friends, to go to parties, to go to the cinema and practice sports.

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attempts to address the task but does not cover all key
features/bullet points; the format may be inappropriate
uses only a limited range of structures
Attempts sentence forms but errors in grammar
predominate and distort the meaning.
You have to compose more accurate and detailed ideas.
At times sentences are very simple.
Practice the times(Present simple, present continuos,
etc.)
Practice the use of the infinitive.
In an essay there are some useful structures, like star
topic, main idea and conclusion.
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