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Form 1: English Guided Writing.

Your school had celebrated National Day recently. Write a letter to your friend to tell him
about the National Days Celebration in your school.

Format:

54, Jalan Bintang,

11900, Gelugor,
Pulau Pinang
th

9 August 2010
Introduction:

Dear Lucy:

- keep my fingers crossed- in hale

and hearty condition-

Recently-

celebrated-

grand

manner-

How are you? I keep ...................................................... you are

in

...................................................................Recently,

celebrated
an

...................................................................It

......................................................................

my
was
Let

school
truly
me

share .............................................................................

- truly- unforgettable1st paragraph:

- started early- gathered- first event- march past event- was accompanied- school band.
- a number of- bodies- march-

The celebrations ..........................................................................

when our students ........................................................... for the

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- looked smart- marched- orderly

preparations. The first event ..................................................................

manner-

The

march

past

..........................................................................

Students from ........................................................................ in the

march. All of them ..................................................................... while
they marched in .........................................................................in front of
the ............................................................
2nd paragraph:
- After- raising- Jalur Gemilang- steadily raised-

After
raising

- national anthem- followed- sang a wide range of- songs- hall- full of melodious tune-

march

past

event,

the

next

........................................................

The

event

was

national

the
flag

was ......................................by our ............................................ The

national
sang

- on cloud nine-

the

anthem

............................................................

................................................................

The

We

hall

was

even
full

- a speech- principal-

of ......................................... We were indeed ........................................

- advised- loyal-

while
a

the

songs

..........................................

After

.............................................................................

that,
He

advised .................................................................................
3rd paragraph:
- potpourri- cultural shows- in

.................................................................................................................

conjunction-

.................................................................................................................

- First- dance troupe- caught the

.................................................................................................................

lime light of the day-

wore

extremely

.................................................................................................................
attractive-

danced gracefully- put on thick make up- eye-

.................................................................................................................
.................................................................................................................
.................................................................................................................

catching costumes- captivating event- poem recital-

.................................................................................................................

- stole the show- country4th paragraph:

-

superb

event-

rhythmic

.................................................................................................................

gymnastic performance-

.................................................................................................................

- gave big applause- ended-

.................................................................................................................

- were on top of the world- played,- ribbons and hoopes-

.................................................................................................................

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Ending:
- In conclusion- red letter day-

.................................................................................................................

- cultivate practice- spirit-

.................................................................................................................

- stop here-

.................................................................................................................

- How was-?
- look forward to hearing-

.................................................................................................................
.................................................................................................................
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Yours sincerely,
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