Writing Class: Makeovers

How good are you at the Writing paper? Do you have difficulty thinking of what to
say? Do you pay enough attention to organisation? Do you often make silly
grammar or spelling mistakes? Or do you think your writing is of a pretty high
standard? Below you'll find authentic answers to some of the tasks that have
appeared in Flo-Joe's Writing Class. Have a look and see how they compare to
your own work.
Makeover 1: letter to a friend
Makeover 2: letter of application
Makeover 3: article
Makeover 4: informal letter
Makeover 5: article
Makeover 6: report
Makeover 7: letter of application
Makeover 8: article
Makeover 9: informal letter
Makeover 10: a report
Makeover 11: informal letter
Makeover 12: article
Makeover 13: report

 Makeover 14: report

Makeover 15: article
Makeover 16: article
Makeover 17: informal letter
Makeover 18: formal letter
Makeover 19: informal letter
Makeover 20: letter of application
Makeover 21: informal letter
Makeover 22: article
Please note the 'Story' task only appears in 'FCE for Schools'. The Essay task
changed in 2015 and the answers below are responses to the pre-2015 task, not
the current question. However, they can still be used as examples of student
essays at FCE lev