Jasons Feedback Where did this student go wrong?

This assignment ticks all the boxes. Shame theyre the wrong ones.

Handed in late
No paragraphing, no punctuation, no structure
Off the topic
Long intro, brief body, no conclusion
No original thinking
Waffles a lot, says very little
Chatty, non-academic language
Mostly irrelevant quotes
No acknowledgement of sources
Printed in Arial 16 point to make it look longer

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