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An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
classmate:
I analyzed three
different online articles
about Bernie Sanders,
and was able to
determine the
credibility of each.
I need more of a
specific, driving
thesis statement,
Taypres.
In analyzing these
articles, I was able to
determine that the
credibility of each source
hinged upon certain
conventions such as the
authors style and the
structure of the work, and
found that the more
formal and presentable the
article, the more
credibility it had.
I need you to
convince me of this
more, Taypres. I'm
not seeing it yet.
I revised my thesis to
center my argument
around the idea of
credibility.
If young people
recognize this authors
use of slang, they may
In my original essay, I
was being repetitive
and dragging my
argument on for the
sake of the word count.
Taking this paragraph
out makes my essay
more interesting to
read.
This sentence
summaries everything I
explained in my essay
and ties back to my
thesis.
Genre is an important
concept to understand,
especially as a reader.