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Organization
a. Is this draft organized in a standard pattern: an introduction, a body with supporting points
presented in a logical order, and a concluding section that summarizes and analyzes the
overall significance of the topic? Note on the paper where the organization seems to be
ineffective. Yes paper is very well organized!
2.
Introduction: The first paragraph(s) should prepare the reader for the topic presented in the paper.
a. Does the introduction begin broadly and narrow to the main idea of the essay? Yes,Very
detailed!
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Body Paragraphs
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2.
Is there information that does not seem relevant to the stated thesis/purpose? No
3.
Does one point/section logically lead to the next point? Are transitions used effectively? Yes very fluid
and easy to go from paragraph to paragraph .
4.
Are there any paragraphs that should be either deleted or moved to another section of the paper? No
Conclusion
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2.
Does the concluding section sum upwithout being repetitivethe major points/conclusions of the
paper? Yes excellent!
After reading the entire essay, are the following required elements included?
Clear thesis yes
Engaging Introduction yes very much so!
Does the conclusion refer to the introduction? Yes
Are there any unnecessary unnecessary explanations that would be better told through
showing rather than telling? No really good.
Love for reading and personal experiences and how they changed during his life
time
Are there any words that are clich, used too often, or meaningless? No
2.
Does the writer use the second person pronoun you? If so, circle it. No
3.
Does the author use phrases such as I think and/or I believe? If so, draw a line through the phrase
to determine if it is necessary. No
4.
MLA Guidelines
Heading yes
1 margins yes