Topic : Is There Too Much Pressure on Girls to Have Perfect Bodies?

1. Introduction
1) Hook : Have you ever try to lose your weight?
2) Connecting information : According to survey of Korean Ministry of Health & Welfare in
2003, 29.3% of girls who are underweight and 64.9% of girls who are normal weight answer
they have experience that trying lose weight. 65% of women answered that the reason they
want to go on a diet is skinny body is looks nice. Only 3.4% answered because they have
health problem.
3) Thesis statement : There is too much pressure on girls to have perfect bodies.
2. Body
1) TV show, Magazine Most Heroines on TV show are all has a pretty face and skinny
body. (Stereotype) It can causes girls having a wrong set of values.
2) Physical and Mental health problem anorexia, bulimia, lack of confidence, etc.
3) Time & money & energy wasting on DIET
3. Counterargument and refutation
1) Counterargument : Some people might say girls willingness of getting perfect body is a
personal thing, not related with media or society.
2) Refutation : However, more than half of womens answer that worrying their size and body
means its not just a personal problem. Its sure that they feel kind of pressure. Needless to
say, the society that a person is judged by appearance is not a healthy society.
4. Conclusion
1) Restated thesis : There are so many strange phenomena originate from pressure on girls to

have Perfect bodies.

2) Opinion : Who can judge the perfectness? We are already perfect enough.