GRE Argument essay

Introduction:
The argument concludes that (---------------). The evidence
cited to support this argument includes (prime 1), (prime
2), and (prime 3). However, the premises are unable to
justify or strengthen the weak conclusion. The main
reasons why the argument is rendered inclusive are
fallacious assumption, ignorance of important factors, and
incorrect cause and effect relationship.
Body1
Firstly, the argument incorrectly assumes that.
Another faulty assumption is that
Also,
Additionally,
Hence, the argument is based on faulty assumptions and
is subsequently not logically strong.
Body 2
Secondly, the argument fails to consider certain factors
that can affect the outcome of the argument in a different
way.
For instance it assumes that ..
Furthermore,..
Also, the argument makes another faulty assumption
that.
Additionally,..
Hence, these assumptions, being incorrect, don not
provide a strong base for the argument to remain

conclusive. Or the argument remains oblivious to these

factors and is thus weak.
Conclusion format:
Hence, it can be concluded that the arguments conclusion
that .is ill-supported by the premises cited namely,.,
. and. The main reasons for the incoherencies in the
argument include ., and. However, the argument can
be strengthened up to some extent by. In spite of the
scope of improvement, argument as written is in cohesive,
illogical and completely inconclusive.