Name: Caitlin

Reviewed By: Miss Daly

Criteria

Novice
1
The speech has little
logical arrangement, and
lacks a clear purpose.

Developing
2
Speaker introduces
him/herself and the
purpose of the
speech. The speech
is aligned to its
purpose
consistently. The
speech could be
arranged more
logically, but still
makes sense. The
speech lacks a
strong conclusion.

Satisfactory
3
Speaker introduces
him/herself and the
purpose of the
speech. The speech
moves in a logical
order. The speech
is aligned to its
purpose
consistently.
The speech has a
conclusion.

Excelling
4
Speaker
introduces
him/herself and
the purpose of the
speech. The
speech moves in a
logical order. The
speech is aligned
to its purpose
consistently.
The speech has a
conclusion with a
call to action or
real-world
application.

Delivery
Nonverbal
Elements

The speaker rarely uses

eye contact to engage his
or her audience. The
speaker moves little and
rarely uses facial
expression or gesture.

The speaker
attempts to use
gesture and facial
expression
throughout the
speech. The
speaker uses eye
contact to engage
his or her audience.
The speakers
appearance matches
the purpose of the
speech.

The speaker shows

some command of
gesture, eye
contact, and facial
expression. The
speakers
appearance matches
the purpose of the
speech. The
speaker attempts to
use body movement
throughout the
speech.

Delivery
Verbal Elements

The speaker rarely or

never attempts to vary
pitch, volume, and rate
to match his or her
purpose. The speaker
lacks clear pronunciation
or articulation.

The speaker
attempts to vary
pitch, volume, and
rate to match his or
her purpose. The
speaker lacks clear
pronunciation or
articulation.

The speaker
attempts to vary
pitch, volume, and
rate to match his or
her purpose. The
speaker uses correct
pronunciation and
articulation most of
the time.

The speaker uses

clear BODY
MOVEMENT to
navigate the space
her or she has.
The speaker
shows clear
command of
gesture, eye
contact, and facial
expression. The
speakers
appearance
matches the
purpose of the
speech.
The speaker
consistently varies
pitch, volume, and
rate to match his
or her purpose.
The speaker uses
correct
pronunciation and
articulation the
entire time.

Organization

Suggestions to improve delivery:

Strong finish! Great Persuasive speech. You really organized your argument well. You improved on your nonverbal
delivery--consistently used specific gestures and facial expression. I can tell you were enthusiastic/passionate about
your topic. Yes, Campus rape policies should definitely be better regulated. That's ridiculous about the "noise
complaint" you mentioned..