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Pleaseusetheformatbelowtocreateyouressay:

Hook!
TopicSentence
(Yourthesisstatementforyouressay)
Claim
(thefirstreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
Claim
(thesecondreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
ConcludingSentence
(restateyourthesisandconcludeparagraph)

TopicSentence
(thisrelatestoyouroriginalthesisstatement)
Claim
(thethirdreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
Claim
(thefourthreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
ConcludingSentence
(restateyourthesisandconcludetheparagraph)

TopicSentence
(thisrelatestoyouroriginalthesisstatement)
Claim
(thefifthreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
Claim
(thesixthreason)
Evidence
(adirectquotationfromorreferencetoasource)
Commentary
(connecttoyourthesis)
ConcludingSentence
(restateyourthesisandreturntoyourhook)

SampleSentenceFrames(donotcopy/paste)
(transitionword)

(Tobeginwith),theAncientEgyptiansdevelopedawaythatallowedthemtopyramids.

(Additionally),thenileriverwasgivingthemwaterandhelpedthemtosurvive.

(Moreover),theEgyptianswere[adjective]inregardstotheirpharaohs.

AccordingtotheEgyptians,thepharaohwas[adjective].

ResearchshowsthatEgyptiansweredoingeverythingthepharaohcommanded(source).
[referringtoasource,paraphraseinyourownwords]

or
Researchshows,_________________________(source).
[directlyquotingasource]

Scientistshavefoundthat
NicholassaysNefertitiisburiedrightnearTut

(source).

Scientistshavefound,thattheEgyptianshadbuilt80pyramids(source).

(Forexample),therewasroomsinthepyramidsthatwerecalledtomb(source).

(Forexample),_________________________________(source).

Thisevidencesupportstheideathattherewas[asystemof]Religion.

Becauseofthis,itisclearthat_____________________.

Sincethe_________did/had_____________,itiscertainthatthey________________.

WhydidtheEgyptiansdoeverythingthepharaohsays?Egyptiansdideverythingthe
pharaohsaidbecausetheythoughthewasoneofthegodsin.Mr.Rutherford'sclass
Whatisa
economy?EconomyisaplacewhereEgyptianstradeandsellthingsin.Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
Egyptianstradeclothesthattheyhadmadeorweaponstheymake.
WhydidEgyptianshave
civilization?Egyptianshadacivilizationbecausetheyhadmanygods.Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
Whywerepyramidspointy?

Pyramidspointedtoheavensothepharaohscangettothegods.
Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
WhydidtheEgyptiansbuiltpyramids?Egyptiansbuiltpyramidssowhenpharaohsdied
Egyptianswrapthemandputtheminthepyramids.Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
Whywerethe
pyramidspointy?SowhenpharaohsdiedEgyptiansputtheminthepyramidsandpharaohsgo
toheaven.Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
WhydidEgyptiansbelievedinlifeafterdeath?Egyptians
believedinlifeafterdeathbecausewhenapharaoh'sdieshebecomesaliveagain.
Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
WhydidEgyptianshaveagovernment?Egyptianshadagovernment
becausethehadlaws.Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
WhydidthegovernmentwantedEgyptiansfollow

theirlaws?thegovernmentwantedtheEgyptianstofollowtheirlawssonobodyhave
problemsMr.Rutherford'sclass.
WhyisEgyptacivilization?Egyptisacivilizationbecauseithasasoilstructure
Mr.Rutherfordsclass.
DidtheNileriverhelptheEgyptians?

(Additionally),thenileriverwas
givingthemwaterandhelpedthemtosurviveMr.Daytonsclass.
DidScientistsfind,thatthe
Egyptianshadbuilt80pyramids?

Scientistshavefound,thattheEgyptianshadbuilt80
pyramids(source).Mr.Dationsclass.
Wastheresystems?Thisevidencesupportstheidea
thattherewas[asystemof]Religion.

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