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DEFENSE TEAM

Period 7
Name

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

The Crucible Mock Trial


Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Notes and Feedback

Emma

10

10

Lead Attorney

Name

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Dylan Marsh

10

Betty Parris
(Witness)

Notes and Feedback

Name

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Delaney
Lisco

10

10

Great start
Good volume and enunciation
Providing extra examples and use of the
text to back your statements was a good
move
Clothing choice was good---professional
and modest, but fun
Good confident delivery
Great use of metaphor

Dressed appropriately
Appropriate elaboration on questions
Be careful of filler like uhm
Great use of text to provide basis for
answers
Blend fact/citation into deposition to
strengthen and back up opinion

Notes and Feedback

Dressed well
Good reasoning provided and based in
quotation from text.

Score

30/30

Score

26/30

Score

29/30

Tituba
(Witness)

Name

Good volume and confident delivery

Careful not to drop off volume at the end of


your lines---we lose a little sometimes.
Very nice use of research
Good plan to connect this issue to cultural
sensitivity in our modern world.

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Notes and Feedback

Kyle Lindey

Abigail Williams
(Defendant)

Name

8.5

8.5

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Notes and Feedback

Mia Moretti

10

10

Lawyer

Name

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Alison
Vlasnik

Caught in contradictions of statement---be


careful to keep to the text of the play
Need to consider what reasons Abby really had
for leaving---use some logic, but make sure that
you present your characters perspective
accurately to the novel.
They didnt try to catch you up on your feelings
toward John or Elizabeth, so you were okay
Careful of diction and syntax in written
deposition

Yoga Pants and t-shirt (both days)


Ohsneaky---slipping potential reasoning in on
John testimony---very craftily worded
questions---present text as well as put
opponent witness on the spot.
Good use of wordplay to dig at opponents girl
time
Careful of colloquialism just sayin
Great use of text as basis for questioning, but
need page numbers for citation

Notes and Feedback

Speak up
Solid questioning but be careful of diction

Score

27/30

Score

28/30

Score

25/30

Witness
Name

Prepara
tion (5)

Knowledg
e
of Text
(10)

Persuasive
ness and
Reasoning
(10)

Presenta
tion and
Delivery
(5)

Notes and Feedback

Sara Lozito

5
Lawyer

Base questions upon textual evidence and use


citation on paperwork to show the work, logic,
and planning.

Crafty questioning---you got in that question of


Bettys culpability in her cousins crime.
Good volume, tone and confident delivery.
Careful not to ask too many questions that rely
too much on readers opinion---try to call them
out more base upon textual fact. SOME opinion
to develop reasoning is good though and I think
you did this well.

Score

27/30

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