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You cant begin a quality essay without establishing a guiding statement from which all ideas extend.
Within the statement name the character, his beginning personality and/or behaviors, changes and ending traits in broad terms. Those
three things will be the foundation of your body paragraphs.
You MUST use phrases and key words from the prompt or assignment.
Thesis
Claim
Statement /
Orwell uses Napoleon to illustrate how power can change a leader in little time as Napoleon grows
corrupt and uses his position to his advantage.
Your response in each row should contain ONE SENTENCE. You will combine the sentences later to create a
cohesive analytical paragraph.
Introduction
1. Make a general
comment about the
subject matter of your
thesis stmt / claim
4. Explain why it is
essential that this
character be analyzed
along with this theme.
Psychological, emotional,
physical results, etc. Be
broad but specific to your
chosen character
Power creates glory and prosperity, but it may also cause a leader to use corruption and
manipulation.
George Orwell, the English novelist, shows in Animal Farm how power and corruption
changes someone.
Napoleon starts off as a follower and turns into an overly confident leader of the farm, but
Napoleon uses his control to suit his own needs and desires.
The animals trust Napoleon to be their leader, but Napoleon abuses his power and
manipulates and lies to the animals.
The farm animals believe Napoleon would act as the next great leader and their farm
would prosper; however, he eventually cares only about himself and destroys the farm and
the animals lives.
Orwell uses Napoleon to illustrate how power can change a leader in little time as
Napoleon grows corrupt and uses his position to his advantage.
6. Thesis Statement / Claim
Topic Sentence
Make a statement
about what this
paragraph will
contain.
2.
3.
Include a primary
source quote to
support your analysis
4.
The Seven Commandments had expectations to act as new way of life and a guideline for
the animals, but they turned into a new set of rules to suit Napoleon.
Napoleon uses the Commandments to his advantage and to meet his desires, while the
animals get manipulated and lied to.
Rumors went around about the pigs acting like humans and some of the animals were
disturbed when they heard that the pigs not only took their meals in the kitchen and used
the drawing-room as a recreation room, but also slept in the beds (Orwell n.pag.).
One of The Seven Commandments is no animal shall sleep in a bed, but Napoleon and
the pigs clearly break this rule as they get caught sleeping on human beds.
Eventually Napoleon changes the seven commandments and starts to mix up the words:
And revisions of the Seven Commandments are continually made to suit Napoleon's
personal wishes (Robb n.pag.).
6. Why is this
statement important
to include in your
analysis? What
further insight does it
provide? How does it
relate to your topic?
7. Describe /
summarize the
characters
personality,
behaviors, etc. as
you have analyzed it
from the first several
chapters of the
novel.
Napoleon changes the most important commandment, which is all animals are equal, to
all animals are equal, but some are more equal than others.
Napoleon acts as the next great leader and tries to make the farm thrive, but his corrupt
destroys the farm.
Topic Sentence
Make a statement
about what this
paragraph will
contain.
9.
Loyalty plays a major role in a relationship between a leader and his followers, but
Napoleon never appreciated the loyalty that the animals showed him.
Napoleons desire for full control of the farm makes him ridiculously selfish as he even
turns his back on the most loyal animal of the farm, Boxer.
After all the hard work Boxer put into building the windmill and satisfying Napoleon,
Napoleon shows no respect and gets rid of him like he is trash.
Napoleon did the unthinkable and got rid of Boxer and Sure enough, there in the yard was
a large closed van, drawn by two horses, with lettering on its side and a sly-looking man in
a low-crowned bowler hat sitting on the driver's seat. And Boxer's stall was empty
(Orwell n.pag.).
Snodgrass says, After wearing himself out with physical labor and misguided devotion to
Napoleon, 12-year-old Boxer longs to retire, but the pigs deceive him and dispatch him to
the local knacker (n.pag.).
The animals must wonder if they will receive the same fate as Boxer and get sent off to a
glue factory when Napoleon feels that they have no use on the farm.
14. Describe /
summarize the
characters
personality,
behaviors, etc. as
you have analyzed it
from the first several
chapters of the
novel.
Napoleon betrays Boxer and he will betray every animal on the farm once he decides they
cannot work to the expectations he has showing his extreme lack of appreciation.
Conclusion
The numerous abilities and powers that Napoleon obtains when ruling the farm makes him
an arrogant, selfish, and manipulative pig.
1.
2.
Include a secondary
source quote to
support your overall
ideas of character
development and
change within the
novel.
Napoleon tries to change everything on the farm to go his way and eventually makes a
pact with the farmer to again enslave the animals (Pearson n.pag.).
3.
Napoleons desire and need for more power makes him exactly what the animals did not
want, which was a dictator who controlled them and did not believe in equality.
4. Describe /
summarize the
characters
personality,
behaviors, etc. as
you have analyzed it
in this essay.
Describe what the
result is from the
characters transition
or changes. What
happens to him in
the end?
Not only does Napoleons journey turn him from a follower to a leader, but he proves that
power and corruption can change someones ideas and views and make you turn your back
on even those that show you loyalty.
Ideas to Consider
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Finding Motivation
Everyone wants something, especially a character in a literary work. Whether a hero desperate to complete a quest, a villain
determined to stop him or a minor character along for the ride, each character in a story will have identifiable wants and needs.
Quite often, though, what a character wants is in direct opposition to what he really needs. For example, a man longing for the
attention of a woman out of his league might need to realize that hell only find true love when he sees his female sidekick in a
romantic light. At the college level, character analysis essays should go beyond simply identifying the wants and needs
motivating the characters; they should also address how the characters affect one another.
Describe the physical appearance of the character and explain what the appearance reveals about the person.
Discuss the language that the character uses throughout the work. Does the character use the same language throughout or
does his or her choice of language change from the introduction to the conclusion?
If provided, include details about the background of the character (some of these details may have to be inferred).
Where/when was the character born and raised? What kind of education does the character have? How does the character's
past experience influence what he or she does or says?
Write about the personality of the character. Does the character act on emotions or reason? What values does the character
exhibit through words or actions? Does the character have goals or ambitions?
Describe and analyze the relationships that the character has with others in the story. Does the character lead or follow
others in the story? Does the character have close friends and family?
Explain the struggle or conflict that the character faces beyond the obvious what are the internal struggles as well as the
external conflicts.
Describe the important actions of the character. What do these actions tell the reader about the character and how the
character faces the conflict?