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    Kayla boone wrote an essay in her sophomore year that lacked depth and support. In her rewritten essay, the paragraphs are much longer and detailed. My vocabulary is much more extensive and my tone as an author is stronger and more assertive.

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    Kayla boone wrote an essay in her sophomore year that lacked depth and support. In her rewritten essay, the paragraphs are much longer and detailed. My vocabulary is much more extensive and my tone as an author is stronger and more assertive.

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    Scholarshipreflection

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    Kayla boone wrote an essay in her sophomore year that lacked depth and support. In her rewritten essay, the paragraphs are much longer and detailed. My vocabulary is much more extensive and my tone as an author is stronger and more assertive.

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    KaylaBoone

    Mrs.Paquin
    ERWC/Period3
    15April2016
    ReflectiveNarrative
    LookingbackattheessayIwroteinsophomoreyear,IcanthelpbutnoticehowmuchI
    haveimprovedasawriter.Atthetime,mywritinglackeddepthandsupportinaddition,the
    majorityofeachparagraphonlyhadaroundfoursentences.Uponreadingtheoriginalessay,its
    obviousthatIwasrushingwhenIwroteit.Theconclusionliterallyonlyhadtwosentencesand
    theparagraphsneededmuchmoreexpansion.Inmyrewrittenessay,theparagraphsaremuch
    longeranddetailed,perhapsevenmoreargumentative.Ichosetoincorporateafewmorequotes
    fromthepassagetoprovidemoresupport,andtheoverallessayisclearerandmoreconcise.I
    expandedonmyargumentsandusedstrongerwordstosoundmoreknowledgeable.Twoyears
    later,myvocabularyismuchmoreextensiveandmytoneasanauthorisstrongerandmore
    assertive.Ihavedefinitelyprogressedasawriterbefore,Imerelythoughtofwritingasa
    mundanetask.Now,Ilovetowrite,whichmaybeareasonastowhymywritinghasimproved
    somuch.

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