THE RISE OF THE DOMANATRIX

By
Jack Stillman

Beginning - Its just a normal day in Ergo City, Mr Star has

just finished a day in the office when a breaking news
update stops him. "Snake Hips returns to take over Ergo - is

this the end". Mr Star knows that this is the final straw.
He rushes home, gets his super suit and then leaves.
Middle - Snake hips is thrusting her way through the town
blasting hipshots at innocent civilians. She gains the
attention of the public and claims shes going to take over
the city. A few police try to shoot her down but she blocks
them with her cape.
Suddenly Mr. Star shows up and a conversation between the
two happens. Mr. Star tries to talk her out of it but she
disagrees. MAD FIGHT SCENE
End - out of nowhere, a small unknown alien called Nanu
enters the fight and tries to restore peace. Both Mr. Star
and Snake Hips seem confused by the introduction of Nanu, so
try to reason with him and see whose side he's going to be
on. Nanu decides to side with Mr. Star and together they
defeat Snake Hips and save the city.

1
Establishing shot of Mr. Star sat at his desk. Dressed in a
black suit, whilst tapping his pen on the desk. He glances
up at his clock to check the time, (5:56).
Meanwhile, Snakehips has just returned to Ergo City and is
ready to take over what she believes is hers.
Mr. Star is walking out of his office and notices a breaking
news report on the TV. Evil villain Snakehips returns to
Ergo. In a panic, he runs home to grab his super suit!
MR. STAR
Sarah! Where is my super suit!
SARAHHH
What!
MR. STAR
We may have a slight problem?!
Mr. Star turns the TV on and shows Sarah the breaking news.
They both stand there with an expressionless look on their
faces.

2.
Snakehips is walking down street laughing to herself with a
massive grin on her face.
SNAKEHIPS
HA HA HA! This is where I belong.
Out of nowhere Mr. Star confronts Snakehips and they begin
to converse.
MR. STAR
What are you doing back here? You know
youre not welcome!
SNAKEHIPS
You know that isnt true, you love my
company.
Snakehips thrust a hipshot at Mr. Star unexpectedly, he
flies backwards and lands on the floor, looking dazed and
confused.
MR. STAR
Now now, there is no need to be
aggressive, is there?
SNAKEHIPS
Oh sorry my dear, just a reaction...
Just as Mr. Star is about to retaliate to Snakehips; a small
and friendly alien, Nanu, wonders towards them both.
NANU
Sorry to interrupt, but I was just
wondering what all the hassle was about?
Both Mr. Star and Snakehips stand looking at the small
alien, confused at who and what he is.
NANU
Erllbo saahto oh sorry my universal
translator is not on English. Greetings
earthlings

Mr. Star and Snakehips continue to stare confused.

MR. STAR
Sorry but err... Who exactly are you.
NANU
I am Nanu, sir. You are?
MR. STAR
I am Mr. Star
SNAKEHIPS
And I am Snakehips.
NANU INSTANTLY RECOGNISES WHO SNAKEHIPS IS AND SENDS
A BLAST INTO HER CHEST WHICH SENDS HER FLYING ACROSS
THE STREET. MR STAR AND NANU RUN FOR COVER.
A fight outbreaks. With Nanu and Mr. Star battling
Snakehips for the city. With each one firing
fearsome powers towards the other. When suddenly
Nanu remembers something and runs into the middle of
the street.
NANU
Mr. Star, Ill distract her whilst you
supercharge and zap her.
MR STAR
Gotcha!
Nanu uses his teleportation device to jump around the street
and distract Snakehips
SNAKEHIPS
Stand still you little S#@*!!.
Just as Nanu teleports for the last time, Mr. Star shoots a
zap at Snakehips and she flies into the rubble.
Silence ensues. As Nanu and Mr. Star stand together in
silence.

To be continued.
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FADE OUT:
THE END