Composition in English

My composition:
Well I understand that when people want to know the weather status, you normally they see on
TV, radio and newspapers.

Also says that some animals can give to know the weather status. For example: the birds when
low air pressures, stop flying because a storm is approaching.

I asked my parents that if they knew of any animal that its behavior will indicate the status
weather, I was told that the cow when lies down with his knees, it means that an earthquake may
occur.

My name is: Gustavo Fabian Robles Mejia level 2