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Process Log 1. I spent a long time debating about what I should write for this essay.

A t first I was going to write about the royal wedding, and then I found this phot o and had to write about it. I thought about the photo and how I could back it u p with information about sharks. I wanted it to be a very pro-shark essay. 2. I spent a half an hour drafting with the help of the writing center, and then a while on my own. I made an outline and went from there. 3. I think I make a good case for the sharks, and I also get my point acros s. 4. I would have given more statistics 5. I want the reader to realize that sharks are good, and not man eating mo nsters. 6. I would like for feedback on how to be more persuasive.

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