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WRITINGS IN ENGLISH
Translation of a Poem from Bengali to English
Settlement
TRANSLATOR’S INTRODUCTION: An open access English translation (occasioned by the need to help an Englishman learn Bengali) of Rabindranath Tagore’s Bengali poem, ‘Bojhaapadaa’, from the original in Bengali. Annotation that follows the English translation (by the present translator) includes, among other things, another English translation by the poet himself. The original in Bengali is given at the end.
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WRITINGS IN ENGLISH
Translation of a Poem from Bengali to English
Settlement
TRANSLATOR’S INTRODUCTION: An open access English translation (occasioned by the need to help an Englishman learn Bengali) of Rabindranath Tagore’s Bengali poem, ‘Bojhaapadaa’, from the original in Bengali. Annotation that follows the English translation (by the present translator) includes, among other things, another English translation by the poet himself. The original in Bengali is given at the end.
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WRITINGS IN ENGLISH
Translation of a Poem from Bengali to English
Settlement
TRANSLATOR’S INTRODUCTION: An open access English translation (occasioned by the need to help an Englishman learn Bengali) of Rabindranath Tagore’s Bengali poem, ‘Bojhaapadaa’, from the original in Bengali. Annotation that follows the English translation (by the present translator) includes, among other things, another English translation by the poet himself. The original in Bengali is given at the end.
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SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900)
English Translation from Bengali:
Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 1 ANNOTATED ENGLISH TRANSLATION OF RABINDRANATH TAGORES BENGALI POEM BOJHAAPADAA ; ;; ; BY SUBHAS CHANDRA GANGULY
SETTLEMENT
Rabindranath Tagore *
Tell your mind to brace; Good or evil come what may Accept the truth with grace
Some are likely to love you Some just cannot chime; Some are totally sold to you Some again dont owe you a dime. Partly it is their nature, Partly yours too dear brother; Partly world is so made Where each is not made for the other. Some deceptions you will suffer; Some will be indulged by you. Some of the goodies will come your way, The rest will be others due
* Rabindranath Tagore See on page 5 under the heading Translators Notes.
SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 2 From the days of the yore The world is so ordered. Why should your fate be so fair That all injuries you will be spared?
Tell your mind to brace; Good or evil come what may Accept the truth with grace
After many a gales gone through Harbour of happiness is in sight; Rocks hidden under the waters Hit your breast alright. Ribs of the cage for a moment, Quiver and break into a howl. Have you to get into a rage for all that And go into a quarrel or brawl? If you can stay afloat That, of course, is the best choice. In case you cannot manage, Just go under without much noise. It is nothing like never seen, And a non-event at the core. For, ship-wrecks occur at the very places Where none has a fear on that score.
SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 3 So, tell your mind to brace; Good or evil come what may Accept the truth with grace.
All are not up to your measure, Nor do you measure up to all; While you may choke under others pressure You may press another into ball. But come to think of it, What is so wanting? For, when you know how to get it, A lot of happiness is a-waiting. Nothing ever changes the azure sky, Soft rays of dawn are as sweet as ever, In a sudden encounter with death, Not death but life that we prefer. The wide world looks as wide Even without the one, Tears for whom from closed eyes Created once an ocean. So, tell your mind to brace; Good or evil come what may Accept the truth with grace.
If sitting under the setting sun, You make your own shadow bigger, And so, by your own doing Darkness in your life you have to trigger, SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 4 You have to axe your own feet By squabbling with your own fate, Then for Gods sake, Just go and do it, why wait? Weep your hearts fill, Shed your barrels of tear, And thus settle with your mind This way or that, somehow or other. Then light your earthen lamp And illumine your dark room. Forget brother how much differences You have with whom.
So, tell your mind to brace; Good or evil come what may Accept the truth with grace. _________
[English translation of Rabindranath Tagores Bengali poem BOJHAAPADAA (.:+:+,:), from his book of poems KSHANIKA (v|++:), (first published-1900). Translation by Subhas Chandra Ganguly (June, 2001). Address for correspondence: B-22/8 Karunamoyee Housing Estate, Salt Lake City, Kolkata -700091, INDIA. E-mail: subhas- _ganguly@yahoo.co.in The original Bengali poem, BOJHAAPADAA (.:+:+,:), can be downloaded from the opening page of the website, Writings of Subhas Chandra Ganguly (http://sites.google.com/site/subhascganguly/writings), where this translation by Subhas Chandra Ganguly is introduced (under the sub-section TRANSLATION FROM BENGALI TO ENGLISH in the section UNPUBLISHED IN PRINT MEDIA), by clicking the link, original in Bengali.] SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 5 TRANSLATORS NOTES
Before putting this piece of writing on the website, Writings of Subhas Chandra Ganguly (http://sites.google.com/site/subhascganguly/writings), the following notes were specially prepared and added, at the suggestion of Sudipta Saraswati. Inclusion of Rabindranaths own translation (later discovery of which by me was merely mentioned in my note first) below as an APPENDIX was also at his suggestion. TRANSLATOR, 26 th February, 2010
Rabindranath Tagore (7 May, 1861 7 August, 1941): A Bengalee by language and birth, he needs no introduction to any inhabitant of Indian subcontinent, who is able to read this poem either in translation or in original (which also is being posted on this website, for those who can read Bengali). And it is beyond self-perceived capacity of the present translator to present, in such a short space, Tagores single-handed contribution to a new phase of Bengali literature/language/culture, dating back roughly from middle of the 19th century.
So, just to give an inkling of his place in Bengali literature, to those non-Indians, who may not have heard of him, I am quoting from one very well known, widely regarded critic/essayist/poet/novelist/scholar/teacher, Buddhadeva Bose (also spelt Buddhadeb Bosu) (1908-1974), whose sparkling, deeply insightful essays, in both Bengali and English, on language and literature has been of great help to me to enrich my own understanding. A much junior contemporary of Tagore, he wrote with equal facility both in English and Bengali. In one of his essays (1948) in English, this is how Bose presented Rabindranath : Rabindranath Tagore is a phenomenon. Rabindranath is our Chaucer and Shakespeare, our Dryden, and our equivalent of the English translators of the Bible. To describe him in terms of English literature one must name quite a number of authors, for he compresses in one mans lifetime the development of several centuries. He has created language both prose and verse. SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 6 [Rabindranath in An Acre of Green Grass: A Review of Modern Bengali Literature, by Buddhadeb Bosu: Papyrus, Kolkata, first published by Orient Longmans in 1948.]
For a brief sketch on Rabindranath and Buddhadeb, one may visit http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rabindranath_Tagore and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Buddhadeb_Bosu, respectively. Search on Internet will yield considerable amount of materials on both of them.
A personal note from the translator: I am far from a habitual translator of poem(s), though in my lifetime, so far, I happened to have done a lot of translation work, but all from prose to prose. Back in June 2001, i.e., about 9 years before, this translation emerged, in a way, quite accidentally, while I had been helping for sometimes back, on professional basis, a very likeable young Englishman, Andrew Preston (sent to me by my friend Sanjay Mitra), while he was in Kolkata, to learn Bengali. He needed to learn Bengali to do his professional job, which required him to interact with Bengalee inhabitants in Kolkata and its suburbs, who were not conversant with English language.
To add some spice to this process of his learning a foreign language, one day suddenly I was struck by the thought of translating one such poem of Tagore (my acquaintance with composition of other Bengali poets their number is quite large being much more limited), the original Bengali of which would appear simpler to follow by a foreigner, but at the same time content will be appealing enough to an adult. So, that dictated the choice of the present poem in its original, which, perhaps is more in the nature of verse than poem. While original was metred in structure, I thought of translating the original in simple prose. But while making such attempt, somehow, with some gradual alteration, translated version, for better or for worse (readers, naturally, would be the best judge), also turned out be metred.
Much later, I discovered that the poet himself, in a letter (in English) to another Englishman of his time, Charles Freer Andrews (1871-1940), ten years his junior and very close associate of him in many ways of his social endeavours, sent his own English translation of the same verse, which however was in prose, and not metred. For interested readers, this translation of the poet is added at the end as an APPENDIX. SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 7 Anyone, able to follow both the original and the translation, is unlikely to miss that in places, his translation deviates from his original in terms of both alteration and deletion. And deviations are such that perhaps these are not easily explainable by compulsions, usually associated with any work of translation (particularly in case of poem/verse) when the two languages in question are as dissimilar, in their structure, vocabulary and idioms, as Bengali and English are. So, the poet must have had his own reason(s), which we do not know. As to whether the deviations can be termed small or considerable, there need not be any general consensus on such matters. It goes without saying that a mere translator cannot take such liberty, open to the original composer. So, in my own translation above, I have tried, within my capacity, to remain as close as possible to the original.
Copyright of Subhas Chandra Gangulys Translation and Notes (c) 2010 by Subhas Chandra Ganguly. This is an open access publication distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative License (see http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by- nc-nd/3.0/us/), which permits anyone (if he/she so wishes) to share this publication, provided (1) the distribution is only for noncommercial purposes, (2) the original author and the source are attributed, and (3) no derivative works including any alterations are made. For any distribution, this copyright statement should also accompany this publication without any alteration and in its entirety.
PUBLICATION HISTORY:
The translation was made in 2001 and the translators notes as well as the accompanying APPENDIX were prepared in 2010. These writings were not published in print media. These are now being published for the first time online as open access publication in the website, Writings of Subhas Chandra Ganguly (http://sites.google.com/site/subhascganguly/writings): August 11, 2010.
SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 8 APPENDIX Poets (Rabindranath Tagore) Own Translation (in English) of His Own Verse/Poem (in Bengali) BOJHAAPADAA ; ;; ; TAKING TRUTH SIMPLY
Whatever may come, my heart, take truth simply, Though there be some who can love you, there must be others who never can, and if you must know the cause, it is as much in you as in them, and in all things around. Some doors are closed against your knocks, while your doors are not open always and to all comers. Such has been and shall be for evermore; and yet if you must have peace, my heart, take truth simply. There is no need to be abusive if your boat founders by the shore, though it sailed through the storm. Keep yourself afloat by all means; but it is impossible to do so, then be good enough to sink without noise. It is a commonplace fact that things may or may not fit you and events happen without asking for your leave. Yet if you must have peace, my heart, take truth simply. You press and are pressed hard in the crowd, but space there is enough and to spare in this world. When you have counted your losses to the last farthing, your sky remains as blue as ever. You find, when suddenly tested, that to live is sweeter than to die. You may miss this and that and the other thing, but if you must have peace, my heart, take truth simply. Must you stand with your back to the rising sun and watch your shadow lengthened before you? SETTLEMENT Original in Bengali: Rabindranath Tagore (1900) English Translation from Bengali: Subhas Chandra Ganguly (2001) 9
Must you take pleasure in finding fault with your destiny and thus tease your soul to death ? Then for mercys sake be quick and have done with it; for if, with the evening stars, you must light your lamp, my heart, take truth simply.
[Contained in a letter (from Rabindranath to C. F. Andrews), dated February 5th, 1916, SHILEIDA LETTERS TO A FRIEND (first published in 1928 under the editorship of C. F. Andrews himself). My own source: THE ENGLISH WRITINGS OF RABINDRANATH TAGORE, VOLUME THREE (1996), Sahitya Akademi, Kolkata, p. 251-252.]
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