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English Advanced writing

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SALIHA JAWAID L1S11BBAM0088 SANA CHODHARY L1F11BBAM2102 SECTION: G SUBMITTED TO: PROF. Irfana umer

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ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
In the name of Allah, the most beneficent and merciful who gave us strength and knowledge to complete this project. This project is a part of our course English advance writing. This has proved to be a great experience. We would like to express our gratitude to our English advance writing teacher Ms. Irfana Umer who gave us this opportunity to fulfill this project.

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Critical Analysis
The article illustrates the serious issue of society that is prevailing with a large intensity because of poverty and unemployment. The claims of poverty and unemployment discussed as significant problem to put the nation in darker view but it neglects their shadow on children as each compelled to leave their preliminary childhood activities turned into earning. Child labor is a severe felony all over the world. The UNICEF defines child labor as some type of work performed by children below the age of 18. There is something seriously wrong with our country which not only fails to educate all its children but also depends on them to keep its economy afloat. The country is heading back into the dark ages with only a few lucky one receiving education. The number of child laborers in our country is about 12 million. According to statistics released by the Federal Bureau of Statistics last year, 3.8 million children in the age group of 5 to 14 years are working in our country out of a total of 40 million children. 50 per cent of these economically active children are in the age group of 5 to 9 years. Even out of these 3.8 million children, 2.7 million claimed that they are working in the agricultural sector. About 73 per cent of them were boys.

Province-wise Comparison of Child Labor Province Total No. of Children in age group of 5-14 years (millions) Total No. of Economically Active Children in Age group of 5-14 years (millions) Ratio of Child Labor

Punjab Sindh NWFP Baluchistan Total

22.63 8.62 6.71 2.07 40.03

1.94 0.30 1.06 0.01 3.31

8.6% 3.5% 15.8% 0.5% 8.3%

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The law says that primary education is compulsory for everyone, but we all know that actions speak louder than words. The government should supply free books to government schools and should make the level of government schools at par with that of private schools so that condition of equality exists. The government should take notice of child labor as well and take strict action against those responsible so that the future of Pakistan becomes safe. There are many poor families who desired to get their children to school but everyone is not financially stable to even nourish them with proper meals. The shortage of food and basic necessities led them to mentally immature and their delicate bodies are bearing a burden of labor and earning. Childhood is the constructive span of life that starts from infancy to learn ways to eat, talk, walk, and to know the new things, that later acquired by them as habits. The learning comprises of insight learning and habitual learning that alters an infant into a groomed child that is possible in a healthy and stable family backing. This happens when the parents are capable of providing with necessities to bring up their children in the best way as the first class to learn is from the mothers lad. Every one is the foundation pillar of nation as each one is the beginners to move ahead to mature and groomed, attained their legitimate desires fulfilled. In the least developed countries, the natives are not aware of the childhood significance their minds restrict for getting food and shelter. Every poor family forcefully pushes their children to earn to get food instead to go to school and get a basic education. The unstable family mindset puts brighter future in darkness owing to lack of awareness to nurture their children.

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Man made circumstances but if one wants to change ones circumstances one needs, to change mind and get one self changed by courage, hope, and enthusiasm. As, Where there is a will, there is a way The childhood manifest the aptitude and concentration one child want to pursue or is inborn specialized of, heading towards a sustainable survival. But this sustainability is in perilous hands to take them in an unwanted way where the darkness of sickness surrounds and ceased them to thrive. Children are substantially put to work that trims their feathers to fly in the sky and each one remained illiterate in society and nobody ponders over their drastic personality that misled by their own parents owing to an imbalance in societal setup. According to1996 the child labor survey findings, there were eight times more children working in the rural areas then in urban areas. In urban setting, children are employed in more diversified occupations such as loading and unloading of goods, hotels and restaurants, fishing, auto workshops, rag picking, shoe-shinning, begging, etc. The social welfare centers and non-governmental organizations tend to control this child abuse but it disseminated in early 1990s rapidly. The social workers tried to made centers and provided them with books to learn and achieved their status in society in spite of their family queries. During the years 2001 and 2002, the government of Pakistan carried out series of consultation with tripartite partners and stakeholders which include relevant government (labor, social welfare), employees, trade unions and NGOs. The provisions have passed to regulate but obligatory agencies show negligence over acting as per mentioned. The government should take action to regulate the law and imposed on parents to send their children to school rather to workshops or factories. The children are flowers of the garden each one should not pluck but poured with love, care and affection that soothes them and permits to look for a better future. The nation has the most powerful tool which is children as they led us and made us able to flourish and successful country. The mere objectivity is to manage the society and its ingredients with proper diligence and responsibility for which former are accountable.

FINAL PROJECT PRESENTATION LEXICAL DENSITY:

There are lexical words and function words out of a total of 265. Lexical density is calculated as follows: Lexical density = (number of lexical words/total number of words) * 100 = (/265) * 100 = %

Childhood is the constructive span of life that starts from infancy to learn ways to eat, talk, walk, and to know the new things, that later acquired by them as habits. The learning comprises of insight learning and habitual learning that alters an infant into a groomed child.

There are 27 lexical words out of a total of 48 in the above paragraph. Lexical density is calculated as follows: Lexical density = (number of lexical words/total number of words) * 100 = (27/48) * 100 = 56.28%

References: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poverty_in_Pakistan http://ncabl.pk/?page_id=225 http://dawn.com/2012/02/07/millions-pushed-into-child-labour-in-pakistan/ http://dawn.com/2012/07/03/child-labour-in-pakistan-3/