Storytelling & Commission

8th February 2013

Dhuran Modha

Online Green-Light Review Part 2

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Contents

Final Script . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page 3 Storyboard . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page 3 Influence Maps . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Page Production Drawings/Concept Art
Environments o Entrance Hall . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page o Hallway . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Page Props o Mouse Trap . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Page Characters o Jeeves Dorian . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page o The Mouse. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Page o Sir Ernest Gaffney Mercer . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page

Creative Partnership . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page

Other Links . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Page 8

Final Script
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Or Go Here: http://dhuranmodha.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/final-script.html

See Below

Completed Storyboard
See Below

These are completed storyboards. They are rough at the moment, but I now have enough in mind to keep going with the other elements of design.

Or Go Here:

http://dhuranmodha.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/storyboard-initial-layout.html

Influence Maps:

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These are my main character, environment and prop influence maps. I have gained a lot of influence from cartoon characters as I think that, because my story is based around a face-off between a human and a mouse, having the characters too realistic would look as good. I aim for them to be recognisable as humans, but changed enough that they arent too intimidating or uncanny. As far as environments go, I have pulled a lot of houses/manors from the Victorian era, mainly from the late 1800s. I like this era because of the elegance of the art a how there is a clear definition between the rich and poor, and this to me helped me to figure out what monetary status my secondary character had (rich), and using that helped me design the exterior and interior of his manor. The main props are going to be the mouse trap and the ancient vase that is going to smash towards the end of the film. The mouse trap is going to be a generic one as it is one that everyone is accustomed to seeing and within cartoons like Tom and Jerry are usually associated with comical effect. The vase is more difficult to design, as it is meant to be an artefact it can be from any point in time, however, the Victorian times were highly religious, I felt that having a religious artefact to be a good direction to go in.

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Environments:
Entrance Hall

Hallway

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Characters:

Jeeves Dorian

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The Mouse

Sir Ernest Gaffney Mercer

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Props:
Mouse Trap

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Creative Partnership:

Comments From Peta-Gaye Brown to myself:

Hi Dhuran, I was thinking about your three things I like idea 1, what if the museum was part of a house or what if it was the queens palace and there's a section of it that was turned into a museum that exhibited weird things like the first mouse trap ever used by the queen or the the first plunger she ever used ect and the mouse trap somehow starts to give the butler trouble .
http://dhuranmodha.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/story-ideas.html#comment-form

Comments from Myself to Peta-Gaye Brown

Hey Peta, idea 5 could be really interesting i think, the end would really shock the audience, and make them more connected with the passion of the character even if the act itself is slightly off putting :P I really like idea 6, it kinda conveys the stereotypes of how people are "supposed" to look. I think you could also hint at the end about his obsessiveness and how he wants to do the same procedure on his daughter showing how kinda of crazy and relentless he is
http://peta-gayebrown.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/potential-script-ideas-ideas-5-and-6.html

This is really good, the script is very descriptive and I can really tell each scene apart.
http://peta-gayebrown.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/online-greenlight-review-storytelling.html

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Evidence of Other Work https://www.dhuranmodha.blogspot.com This is the link to my blogs main page, where there is evidence of my other work which includes: Film Reviews, Thumbnails Influence Maps, Life Drawings, Maya Toolkit, Photoshop Toolkit And Animations.

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