Integration Exercise

Example of Proper Integration:

According to Courtney Anttila author of, TXTing: H8 it or luv it, texting has taken our world by storm. In fact, 41 million subscribers sent texts nearly every day (Anttila 91).

Each of the following has documentation and/or source integration errors. Some may also have grammatical errors. Correct the mistakes.
1. Throughout the years text messages has increased, according to TXTing: h8 it or luv it by in 2005, about 7.3 billion text messages were sent within the United States every month, up from 2.9 billion a month the previous year (Noguchi).41 million subscribers sent texts nearly every day ( M:Metrics Study) (91). It will not be long before everybody uses text messages instead of calling. Texting slang is not good use to classroom. Students are worry about use texting slang.[Not only do people make the wrong assumption that using texts is automatically a burden to the English language, but they also worry that texting has brought more cheating into classrooms.] (Anttila) According to Courtney Anttila a student at Southwest Minnesota Universty the researchers found that the children who were better at spelling and writing were the ones who texted the most. Smith, Alexandra. Texting Slang Aiding Childrens Language Skills. The Guardian 11 Sept. 2006: 93 Print According to Courtney Anittila who is a college student at Southwest MN State University [t]exting slang is considered to be much more common than it actually is (Anittila, Courtney. TXTing: h8 or luv it. Boston, MA: Bedford/St. Martins Press, 2011. Print). Imagine a 15 year old boy aplying for a jod and on the applection he puts. "I want 2 b a counselor because I love 2 work with kids". (O'Connor) Ian McNeilly was quoted saying I dont think text message and MSN messenger styles are a sign of declining standards, but changing literacies in an article about young adolescents and how texting may affect their proper uses of the English language. (Antilla 92) Back in 2007, Irena Barker stated that You get initialismsLOL for laugh out loud...letter and number homophonesr and 2, but they are not as widespread as you think. According to Courtney Anttila from Southwest Minnesota State University [] texting demonstrates the constant developmental change and manipulation of language that happensover time and creates a new literacy of people to communicate with (OConnor). (Anttila 91) The texting language is gradually replacing the language slang [Students and other text-message users have made the new language increasingly detailed over the years, letting people send more information in a smaller amount of space.](Anttila) at the United States. According to Courtney Anttila, "[t]exting slang is also considered to be much more common than it actually is" (Anttila 93). Courtney Anttila writes, people assume that texting replaces or damages Standard English because adolescents who text are not writing grammatically correct messages (Anttila 92). Crispin Thurlow, a researcher from the University of Washington studies nineteen year olds and analyzes their text messag [ing] at Cardiff University to find out who uses abbreviation and apostrophes in their messag [ing]. A PHD from London University named Tim Shortis uses [using] vernacular language for text messag [ing]. In the 1990s slang or shorthand developed rapidly with terms such as LOL instead of laugh out loud, and gr8 instead of great.

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14. Courtney Anttila a student from Southwest Minnesota State University stated, [in] 2005, about 7.3 billion text messages were sent within the United States every month, [] (Anttila 91). 15. Courtney from Southwest Minnesota State University said ,"[t]exting is a part of the continual development of English and has a large impart on today's world ".( Anttila 94) 16. Cell phones today have an auto correct on them, so to me texting can help kids better themselves by texting. Just like (Smith 93) said using abbreviations while texting can be used in a positive connected with literacy achievements. 17. While I was reading the article, I read about how some people seem to believe that kids who text a lot are getting poor grades on their test, [a]lthough there have been some instances where the texting-slang has been used in inappropriate places, there is no direct correlations between people who text and poor scores on standardized English texts (Smith 93). 18. I agree with the statement OConnor says, regarding that texting is abusing the English language and how texting is starting to become a new way of communication for most people, [s]ome see texting slang as butchering the English language. However, texting demonstrates the constant developmental change and manipulation of language that happens over time and creates a new literacy for people to communicate with (OConnor 91). 19. Twelve-year secondary English teacher and director of the National Association for the Teaching of English, Ian McNeilly, says [he] [doesnt] think that text message and MSN messenger styles are a sign of declining standards, but changing literacies. Children are usually capable of differentiating between the two (Anttila 92) 20. Anttila think texting show students a way to parctice their writing skills outside class."it's a fast, EZ way 2 communic8."(p.8) 21. Text messaging, as long as I have been doing it, has not affected my language skills. Texting is just a quick way to send out information in short and quick sentences. Researchers at Coventry University found that children who were better at spelling and writing were the ones who texted the most. 22. Txts r gr8 but not in exams According to Ian McNcilly a twelve year secondary English teacher.

Remember:
Use transitional words and signal phrases when integrating quotes. Use brackets to change case, punctuation, and tense when necessary to maintain the grammatical integrity of the sentence with which you insert a quote. It is unnecessary to include ellipses in brackets at the beginning of a quote. Paraphrases and summaries must document sources as well; the authors of the information must be made evident either in a signal phrase or the citation and the page numbers must always be included in the parenthetical. You must indicate credentials of source; who are they, what makes them an expert, why is their information relevant? Improperly or inadequately citing sources is plagiarism. Know how to cite a work within a work; give credit to the correct person. End-marks come after the parenthetical. EXACT PHRASING MUST BE IN QUOTATION MARKS YOU CAN NOT USE THE SAME SENTENCE STRUCTURE AS THE ORIGINAL

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