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Paragraph/Sentence Error Suggestion(s)

NETS
Nets 1a. 3rd sentence recently have had remove the word “had”
Nets 1a. 4th sentence access to Moodle access to Moodle, (insert comma)
Nets 1c. 1st paragraph 1st sentence as an instruction tool as an instruction tool, (insert comma)
Nets 1c. 2nd paragraph 1st sentence site is blocked to guest site is blocked to “guests”
Nets 1d. 1st paragraph 2nd sentence Because my degree program is online Because my degree program is online, (insert comma
Nets 1d. 1st paragraph 5th sentence created through collaboration are created through collaboration “were a” literature
matrix and “a” data collection matrix.
Nets 1d. 2nd paragraph 2nd sentence As a group As a group, (insert comma)

Nets 2a. 2nd paragraph last sentence data bases databases (remove space)
Nets 2b. 1st paragraph last sentence They have to make sure They “had” to make sure…
Nets 2c. 1st paragraph 1st sentence and resource list allows and resource list allow
Nets 2c. 2nd paragraph 1st sentence benefit from technology benefit from technology, (insert comma)
Nets 2d. 2nd paragraph last sentence assess quiz by its assess quiz by its’ (insert apostrophe)

Nets 3b. 2nd paragraph 3rd sentence We started off my reading We started off reading (take out my ??-odd wording)
Nets 3c. 1st paragraph 2nd sentence may seem elementary, but may seem elementary, I (remove but)
Nets 3d. 1st paragraph support s take out space between support s (supports)

Nets 4a. 1st paragraph 2nd sentence appropriate use of computer appropriate use of computers (add s)
Nets 4b. 1st paragraph 5th sentence Without the use of Moodle Without the use of Moodle, (insert comma)
Nets 4c. 2nd paragraph 4th sentence create thoughtful post create thoughtful posts (add s)
Nets 4d. 2nd paragraph 2nd sentence After we discuss these values After we discuss these values, (insert comma)

Nets 5a. 2nd paragraph 1st sentence member of my schools member of my schools’ (insert apostrophe)
Nets 5b. 2nd paragraph 1st sentence Like mentioned above Like mentioned above, (insert comma)
Nets 5c. 2nd paragraph 1st sentence research is done correctly research is done correctly, (insert comma)
Nets 5d. 3rd paragraph 2nd sentence allow staff development allow staff development, (insert comma)
Nets 5d. 3rd paragraph last sentence related staff development related “to” staff development (insert word “to”)

Learning Beliefs

Intro Paragraph 3rd sentence For the longest time For the longest time, (insert comma)
Intro Pargraph 4th sentence at the course today at the course today, (insert comma)
Intro Paragraph last sentence have allowed me “has” allowed me
1st belief 7th sentence In the assignments In the assignments, (insert comma)
1st belief 10th sentence Lastly both the assignments both OF the assignments or both assignments
2nd belief next to last sentence for professional development for professional development, (insert comma)

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