Why Information Technology is Intelligent Business

Information technology makes business smarter. Information technology protects

processes, defines and makes understandable and clear data, helping bring
customer or client needs more of a focus for a business - There is a participle phrase
error, most likely with the choice of the preposition, "of" -David Woo 8/5/09 5:16 PM.
Information Systems have become the backbone of the business world. Information
Systems are the basis for many businesses. Business transactions between
individuals, corporations and other individuals have become second nature for most
people by using Information Systems.

University of Phoenix (UOP) has used information systems Capitalization -David

Woo 8/5/09 5:18 PM to become the largest University in North America. “As of
February 28, 2009, 397,700 students were enrolled at University of Phoenix, the
largest private university in North America,” (Paul, 2009). Including myself and the
students in this class. - Sentence fragment -David Woo 8/5/09 5:19 PM The online
education system of the University of Phoenix has connected students with
education that might not otherwise be going to college - Relative clause error; who
might not otherwise be going to college, education, or students with education?
-David Woo 8/5/09 5:20 PM. University of Phoenix uses its online systems to teach
students across the country and all over the world. “The University of Phoenix has
used Information technology to be a true enabler of education and collaboration in a
real world environment” (Hedding, 2003). The Online Learning System (OLS) allows
students to collaborate on projects, essays - unsure of what is being listed, to-
infinitives or these nouns; if it is the former, then a conjunction is needed here
-David Woo 8/5/09 5:22 PM, chat with teachers and with resource materials -
Enumerating error; unsure if the meaning should be, "...allows students to
collaborate with resource materials..." -David Woo 8/5/09 5:23 PM no matter where
they happen to be on earth, if they have access to a computer with an internet
connection. The UOP online library is purported to be the second largest library in
the world. UOP has hundreds of learning centers all across the United States
thousands of miles from the actual Phoenix, Arizona site allowing it to bring the
education to the students and jobs to the teachersOmit articles -David Woo 8/5/09
5:29 PM . Their goal: make higher education highly accessible for working students.
The solution: Provide Capitalization -David Woo 8/5/09 5:26 PM a learning center
that they can go to if they have an internet connection.