the best and easiest idea for us to do is the fashion dept which being trying to get people to give

us money to start a production of couture gowns & suits it hasnt been done before on kick
starter its very easy prolly wont take that long as the other stuff because one we dont have that
much time two hes not gonna really do anything but read this crap n make sure we did it right so
easy peezy lemon squeezy should be our goal and this is the easiest ive seen.
i sent pictures to everyones email. i can design anything with anything so i think itl be fun and
we can all put our ideas even jedi thats why were doin a suit also so everyone can have a part
and i might actually produce a real kick starter to raise money to get my clothing line off the
ground welp lets have a discussion about this were running out of time we need a topic and
fast.




Select a campaign out of the five you think are the most persuasive, and write an analysis
identifying:

Victoria
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/playattentiongames/mall-adventures?ref=live

1. Author: Matthew McFarland
2. Purpose: To help create a new interactive activity for your kids with using your local mall
and your favorite heros. You can have scavenger hunts, riddles, codes etc. Its just
another cool way to help your kids not have a boring day. It usually involves some sort of
story where they have to complete the mission with in the mall.
3. Audience: The audience would be for families with kids that are older than 5.
4. Video Pitch (Description): Its a video basically telling you about a book Matthew created
to have the fun mall adventurer for your kids. They show you a real video on how much
fun the kids are having on their mall adventure.
5. Rewards: You get to be listed as a Friendly Bystander, or get a book at the end it just
depends on how much you donate the higher you give the more you get. A reward for
Matthew himself is that he can get his book world wide
6. Stakeholders: This project is $4,566 from its goal from the last time I checked. It's far
from his goal and I do not think that this project will get far. In my opinion it's a waist
because parents just don't do those activities.
7. From what I saw he was using persuasion to parents with something new for your
children to have fun with.
8. ethos: your children will have something fun to do at the mall.
Pathos: his attitude was fun and energetic so that he can persuade you that his invention is fun.
Logos: the logic in this is that your kids can have something to do that's fun and you can tag
along inside the mall.
Kairos: the timing in this would be any time. You could go to any mall or shopping area.
Fashion line of suits and gowns and we can raise money for production
cost
ok or for local designers here idk like a platform to get artist out to the
public

Taylor
:https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/190080816/nell-shipman-girl-from-gods-country-
film?ref=discover_rec (Nell Shipmen first lady heroine in film who vanished)
~ Taylor Brown~
1. Author: Karen Day
2. Purpose: To inform the world of first action-adventure heroine, who was eliminated from history
to due to the fact that in America she was a woman and also because Candana didnt want
anything to do with her because she got her success in America. (She was a Canadian)
3. Audience: I perceived that the audience is anyone who is a film lover, aspiring female
actresses, and feminist.
4. Video Pitch (description): Given a voice to someone who was silent. (Director notes) They
want to set out to prove that without Nell Shipmen no female actress, filmmaker, producer, etc.
will be doing the work they are doing today.
5. Rewards: Consist of a thank you letter to being included in the credits.
6. Stakeholders (people who have something to gain or lose because of the project): This project is
no where near its goal so I believe everyone who pledge money is losing. Only people who
pledge big has something to gain ranging from meeting Nells family to possible meet a movie
star.
7. Rhetorical situation being responded to (what situation prompted people to identify the need):
8. Use of ethos, pathos, logos, and kairos


Dibs- Jedi
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1012484705/mobile-rpg-module-travel-sized-magnetic-
role-playi?ref=search

1. Author: Ann Arbor
2. Purpose: To gather funding for creating a mobile RPG magnetic tabletop, so that
gaming can take place anywhere.
3. Audience: Roleplayers or Grid type war games players who wish to be able to play their
games even while away from most supplies, or would like to use a system that they can take it
anywhere.
4. Video Pitch (description): There was no video pitch present because of the nature of the
project, but there was a large amount of descriptions and high resolution pictures that show the
board as being and 11.5 by 11.5 using a 20 x 20 grid patter that is lazer cut onto a 32 gauge
steeel plate that gives you 400 square inches of magnetic gaming space. the game board itself
also had many customization options that allows for all types of roleplayers to be more
specifically catered to by offering the board as having customization options to make it double
sided or singled sided, as well as changing the logo on top of the board and some of the internal
components to be themed towards a zombie campaign, sci-fi campaign or traditional fantasy
campaign.
5. Rewards: the rewards begin at a $5 contributer that doesn't get a piece of the project,
but gets noted as being a contributor by the development. next at $25 you can recieve a wall kit
to have some of the magentized enviornmental pieces for use in your other games or to have
extra once the product actually gets to market. At $75 you are able to recieve a single sided
game board in one of the three themes with a wall kit, figurines, and magnetic stands for figures
you possess and would like to include in the game. The rewards gradually include more figures,
customization options, magnetic stands, and game boards until they taper off at $400 or more,
which includes one doublesided board of each theme, 12 maps, 6 generic game pieces, 8
magnet stands, and wall kit add ons for each of your 3 new boards.
6. Stakeholders (people who have something to gain or lose because of the project): The
stakeholders in this project are not just the contributors, but all rpg fans in general. Because
there isnt a product like this in gaming right now, any rpg player can be impacted by this
product. Current map producers like wizards of the coast are stakeholders as well. Even though
they may lose some sales in existing products once this hits the market, this products success
would demonstrate not only a need for a portable board like this in gaming, but a viable market
for it as well and likely lead the major companies like wizards of the coast creating their own
personal version.
7. Rhetorical situation being responded to (what situation prompted people to identify the
need): Lack of a portable gaming platform for RPG players.
8. Use of ethos, pathos, logos, and kairos
Ethos: boasts two successfully started and backed kickstarter campaigns prior to this
one. Already have a laser cutter on lease that they can use.
Pathos: appeals to fans of the genre through customizable options that allow for deeper
immersion into the game.
Logos:the logical benefits of having a 400 or 800 square inch magnetic gaming board
offers enumerable benefits while wanting to game while traveling.
Kairos: the timeliness of the matter is evident because no product like this exists for the
rpg marketplace currently despite the games being popular for over 25 years.