4-Exemplary 3-Accomplished 2-Developing 1-Beginning Introduction Paragraph (Option, Thesis Statement) Introduces your option for US involvement in an engaging way and ends with a strong thesis statement that clearly outlines your position. Introduces option for the US involvement and includes a thesis statement clearly tied to your option. Has some of the elements (introduction of subject and beginning of thesis) but is not fully developed. Iis missing many of the elements including clarity on the option being outlined and/or a thesis statement. Body Paragraphs All body paragraphs have strong evidence to support reasons and link to thesis; two paragraphs focus on claims/evidence which back chosen option, one paragraph focuses on a counterclaim. All body paragraphs have some evidence to support reasons and link to thesis; two paragraphs focus on reasons/evidence which support chosen option, one paragraph focuses on a counterclaim. Structure of body paragraphs is confusing, may not contain clear stand on any one option for US involvement. Some connection to thesis, with beginnings of reasons/evidence. Body paragraphs lack structure, with no transitions and little or no connection to clear option, and/or reasons, or evidence to back that option. Argument (Reasons and Evidence) Body paragraphs have insightful reasons, well supported by relevant evidence including facts from readings and films with meaningful analysis. Body paragraphs have reasons, supported by relevant evidence including facts from readings and films with analysis. Body paragraphs may have reason, supported by some evidence including facts from readings and films but needs more detail. Body paragraphs are missing reasons, evidence, and analysis. Concluding Paragraph Restates thesis in new words, summarizes reasons, assesses the rebuttal, and goes above and beyond to connect the need for the US to take this stand in the Middle East to the global community. The concluding paragraph restates thesis in new words, summarizes reasons, assesses the rebuttal, and makes connections to the world outside the classroom. The concluding paragraph restates thesis but may not use new words, summarizes some reasons, and may begin to assess the rebuttal. The concluding paragraph may hint at the thesis but does contain clear connections to the reasons or the rebuttal. Writing Process Final product includes a completed evidence based claims organizer, an outline, required drafts, and clear evidence of revision and edits based on all draft feedback. Final product includes a completed evidence based claims organizer, outline, required drafts, and evidence of revision and edits based on draft feedback. Final product includes most of an evidence based claims organizer and/or outline, a rough draft, weak evidence of revision and edits based on some draft feedback. Final product may include an incomplete evidence based claims organizer, an outline and/or draft, and contains no evidence of revision or edits. Spelling and Grammar (Conventions) The essay is free from most spelling and grammar errors. Only a few spelling and/or grammar errors remain. The spelling and/or grammar errors begin to be a distraction from the clarity of the writing. Many spelling and/or grammar errors that can distract or confuse the reader. Comments: