SULIT

(BLHW 2403)
SULIT
SECTION A INTRODUCTION & DOCUMENTATION (20 MARKS)

PART I: Recognising Information Elements (10 marks)

1. Objective
2. Scope
3. Background
4. Scope
5. Organisation
6. Objective
7. Background
8. Objective
9. Organisation
10. Background


PART II: Documentation (10marks)

References:

1. (a) & 2 (a) Accept any suitable answers


1. (b) Evans, A., Martin, K. &Poatsy, M.A. (2012). Complete technology in
action (8
th
ed.) USA: Prentice Hall.

2. (b) Brooker, A., Thornton, M. &Rugh, J. (2010). Technology
improvements pathways to cost-effective vehicle electrification. In A.
Brown (Ed).), Green Technologies and the mobility industry, pp.35-48.
Warrendale, USA: SAE International










SULIT
(BLHW 2403)
SULIT


SECTION B PROCESS & RESULTS (20 MARKS)

PART 1: ERROR ANALYSIS (10 marks)

No. Line No. Error Correction

1.

3 followed follow
2.

5 bashed bash
3.

9 had come has come
4.

11 observes observed
5.

14 spelled spell
6.

20 functioned function
7.

22 take took
8.

27 prohibited prohibit
9.

30 had tried have tried
10.

33 lead led


PART II: FAULTY PARALLELISM (10 marks)
No
.
Line
No.
Error Correction

1.

8-9 Europeans bought us; but we were
sold by the Africans
Europeans bought us; but the
Africans sold us
2.

12 ..was religious persecution. ..didreligious persecution..
3.

16 criminals who were hungry ..hungry criminals
4.

17 than to stay inert knowing than staying inert knowing..
5.

19 a sailcloth covered wagon.. ..a wagon covered with sailcloth..
6.

21 an equally strong will to be alive an equally strong will to live
7.

22 and all that we have
accomplished
and accomplishments
8.

23 viewing the heaven with awe the heaven we view with awe
SULIT
(BLHW 2403)
SULIT
9.

26 or where we are located our station or location
10. 26-27 the awakening so meaningful ..the meaningful awakening..


SECTION C CONCLUSION& RECOMMENDATIONS (20 MARKS)


ELEMENT


POINT

Justifying the
purpose/objective


Objective investigate students preference service
providers and plans peripherals offered cellular
service providers

Reviewing the
scope/method


Primary data collected randomly distributing
questionnaires 350 students

Reviewing
findings


Findings Simax top service provider in UTeM
better network coverage pre-paid plan most popular
choice peripheral - SMS - most popular means of
communication more economical making calls

Explaining
findings


Usage of cellular phones more preferred convenient
to users

Discussing
limitations


Limitation findings only true UTeM students
cannot be generalised other university students

Drawing
implications


Implications the results indicate - cost and network
coverage important factors influence students
choice selecting hand phone service provider plans
peripherals

Making
recommendations


Accept any suitable answers


SULIT
(BLHW 2403)
SULIT


Component Well-written Satisfactorily written Poorly written


Content
(10 marks)

7 -10

4 - 6

1 - 3

Almost all (6-7)
elements are
included


Some elements (3-5)
are included

Only (1-2)
elements are
included


Language
(5 marks)

4 - 5

2 - 3

0 - 1

Language fairly
accurate, one or
two slips
Hardly any spelling
errors
Meanings are clear
Variety sentence
structure


Language fairly
accurate with some
minor errors
Few spelling errors
Meaning comes
across satisfactorily
Some variety of
sentences, but
tendency to use
simple sentences


Language fairly
inaccurate with
more spelling
errors
Meaning is often
unclear
Hardly any variety
of sentences


Format-
Arrangement
(5 marks)


4-5


2-3


0-1

Paragraph has unity
and coherence
Well-linked
Points are in
correct sequence


Paragraph shows
some unity and is
reasonably coherent
Able to link ideas
satisfactorily
1 or 2 points are not
in correct sequence


Paragraph lacks
unity and
coherence
Hardly any attempt
to link ideas
More than 2 points
are not in correct
sequence




CONTENT (10 marks) + LANGUAGE (5 marks) + FORMAT (5 marks) = 20marks


OVERALL TOTAL : x/60 X 40 = 40%