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ARGUEMENTATIVE ESSAY

HEALTH AND HEALING AT YOUR FINGERTIPS



INTRODUCTION
THESIS STATEMENT : This new theory argues that healing is at our fingertips: we
can be healthy by doing Reiki on a regular basis.


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TOPIC SENTENCE: How about a safer and more economical way of healing?
SUPPORTING DETAILS: When doing Reiki to yourself, you do not need anything
except your energy so it is very economical
Reiki depends on the energy within our bodies. It is a
simple and effective way of restoring the energy flow.

CONCLUDING SENTENCE: There are no side effects and it is scientifically
explained.


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TOPIC SENTENCE: Opponents of alternative healing methods also claim that
serious illnesses such as HIV/AIDS and cancer cannot be treated
without drugs.
SUPPORTING DETAILS: How can Reiki make these people healthy again?
Instead of drugs which are expensive and have many
side effects, you can use your energy to overcome the
hardships of life, find an emotional balance, leave the
stress of everyday life and let go of the everyday
worries.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE: we should definitely start learning Reiki and avoid
illnesses before it is too late.



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TOPIC SENTENCE: How would it be possible to find time to do Reiki to ourselves?
SUPPORTING DETAILS: it does not require more than 15 minutes of our time.
It is a wonderfully simple healing art, an effective
method of relaxation and stress-relief.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE: it is less time consuming than medicine if we think of all
the time we spend taking medicine for some
complaints and taking some more for the side effects as
well.

CONCLUSION ESSAY: it is easy to learn by anyone
It also enhances physical, mental, emotional and spiritual
well-being and the benefits last a lifetime.














MONEY

INTRODUCTION
THESI S STATEMENT
- If you disagree with me, lets look at the reasons for my stand.

BODY
MAI N I DEA 1
- One of the main gates to happiness is to stay healthy
SUPPORTI NG DETAI LS
- He can be healthy or it does not matter even if they have diseases because these rich men
have lots of money to pay their medication.
- With lots of money we are tend to temp ourselves to exotic, luxurious food.
- Rich people are probably lack of exercise
- e.g : How a person can enjoys his life and feels happy when he is confined to a wheelchair
or bed-ridden. He would not even be glad spending his money and time curing his sickness.
CONCLUDI NG SENTENCE
- wealth cannot bring happiness.

MAI N I DEA 2
- One can make lots of money but he may not enjoy even the beauty of nature around them or
the branded, expensive things with them.
SUPPORTI NG DETAI LS
- Do they really enjoy the pleasures of life?
- They are simply too busy with their work.
- Very few of them can really take a holiday as a treat for themselves for their schedules are
always full and they are so stressful with their works.
- e.g : Most specialists have to stand-by 24 hours in case of emergency calls from the
hospitals.
CONCLUDI NG SENTENCE
- One with a moderate income can feels happier if he leads a simple life and be grateful with
what he has.

MAI N I DEA 3
- A children or a teenage brought in moderate family is better than in a rich family.
SUPPORTI NG DETAI LS
- As the sons or daughters of billionaires, their parents will give them whatever that they want
in material
- Children need parents who can listen to their problems and give them words of wisdom,
teaching then day by day.
- e.g : Parents who are not rich may not be able to buy branded things to satisfy their children
but with more communication and understanding
CONCLUDI NG SENTENCE
- Money does not promise a happy, caring family.

CONCLUSI ON
- Money may be able to buy a lot of things but not love, friendship, health and others
- I stand firm that money cannot bring happiness.

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