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Business English:
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introduction
assets!
[+]
immediate
[+]
simple
[+]
direct
[+]
borderless
but
[-]
spam
[-]
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
information overload
?
invest in trust
cut information overload
subject line
presentation
style & tone
content
subject line
be precise
be precise
HELLO
be precise
Re:
be precise
be precise
Our meeting
be precise
Request
be precise
Appointment
be precise
Our appointment
be precise
Your order
be precise
increased trust
but also
increased information overload
be brief
be brief
delivery 4
order 1
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be ordered
delivery 4
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order 1
be ordered
order 1
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delivery 4
be ordered
Yours faithfully
John Smith
you know the addressee’s name
(i) formal or neutral
Dear Mr Brown
Yours sincerely
John Smith
Dear Ms Jones
Yours sincerely
John Smith
Dear Ms Catherine Jones
Yours sincerely
John Smith
you know the addressee’s name
(ii) informal
Dear Catherine
Regards
John
Hi Cathy
Best
John
Dear Catherine Sincerely yours
Hi Cathy Best regards
Hello Cathy Best wishes
Cathy Cordially
Hey CATH! Regards
Yo As ever
Yours
Best
Love
you are writing to a group
Dear Colleagues /Subscribers / Friends
Yours
John
Dear All / Everyone
Yours
John
Greetings
Yours
John
e-mail is not:
avoid e.g.
expanded forms I am / she is / we do not
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Regards
John
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Dear Catherine
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Regards
John
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Dear Catherine
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Regards
John
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Dear Catherine
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Regards
John
don’t SHOUT!
Dear Catherine
Regards
subject line
presentation/
style & tone
content
style & tone
I am in grande gratitudine for the massive and
importante bundle of silk, which will bring lacrime
allegre to the eyes of molte bellissime signore Florentine.
Winston Churchill
help
assistance
so
consequently
if
provided that
take part
participate
verbosity in prepositions
to
in case
after
subsequent to
for
in favour of
short sentences
SOURCE: Shirley Taylor, Model Business Letters, E-mails & Other Business Documents, Prentice Hall
% of people
who will
understand
on first
reading
in sentence
7-10 words
95%
SOURCE: Shirley Taylor, Model Business Letters, E-mails & Other Business Documents, Prentice Hall
% of people
who will
understand
on first
reading
in sentence
15-20 words
75%
SOURCE: Shirley Taylor, Model Business Letters, E-mails & Other Business Documents, Prentice Hall
% of people
who will
understand
on first
reading
in sentence
27+ words
4%
few paragraphs
max 4 paragraphs
Dear Catherine
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Regards
John
max 4 lines per paragraph
Dear Catherine
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Regards
John
but avoid 1 line 1 sentence paras
Dear Catherine
Regards
John
need more text?
Dear Catherine
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> use an attachment
Please see attached
e-mail
John Smith bros.
23 High Street
Exampton
PS1 2TO
UK
Tel./Fax: +44 5678910
Cell: +44 789101234567
To: Catherine Jones (c.jones@company.com) david.nicholson@fastwebnet.it
Dear Catherine
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subject line
presentation
style & tone/
content
content
a sentence is a unit of thought
a paragraph is a thematic unit
1st paragraph
details
explanation
info
Dear Saddam
close
Dear Saddam
Best
George W.
subject line
presentation
style & tone
content/
conclusions
be human
make it easy for your correspondent
use friendly language
use just enough stuff
use just enough words
use just enough ideas
use just enough info
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some stuff we didn’t have time for
‘to’ ‘cc’ and ‘bcc’ boxes
legal implications:
privacy & staying out of trouble
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